Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: avoid saying you are "photogenic" (which describes a person, not a habit) and remove filler words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also use more accurate vocabulary (e.g., "scenic views").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing scenic landscapes, such as mountains and lakes, because I like capturing light and atmosphere. For example, I often wake up early to photograph misty mountain sunrises.

Gợi ý: Be direct and avoid prefatory phrases like "Let me think in my perspective." Use a clear topic sentence and expand with a specific reason and an example, connecting ideas with linking words (e.g., "because", "for instance"). Avoid vague statements like "we can clearly see"—explain why that matters to you.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer quieter, less crowded scenes and clearer horizons for sunrises and sunsets. For instance, when I visit a village, I can photograph wide-open fields and dramatic skies without buildings blocking the view.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, complete sentence and avoid repetition. State your preference, give a reason, and, if possible, contrast with other countries. Use specific examples of places to make your answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because India has diverse landscapes, from Himalayan peaks to coastal beaches. For example, I love capturing the vibrant colors of Rajasthan and the serene backwaters of Kerala, though I would also like to photograph European cityscapes someday.

× Well, of course I'm a photogenic person and I love to take pictures of the, uh, scenario views like mountains and all.

✓ Well, of course I'm a photogenic person and I love to take pictures of scenic views, like mountains and so on.

The word 'scenario' is the wrong adjective; the correct adjective for pleasing natural sights is 'scenic'. Also 'and all' is informal; 'and so on' or 'and such' is clearer. Suggestion: replace 'scenario views' with 'scenic views' and use a more standard phrase such as 'and so on' for clarity.

× Let me think in my perspective. I like to capture views in rural areas rather than urban areas.

✓ Let me think. From my perspective, I prefer to capture views in rural areas rather than in urban areas.

'Let me think in my perspective' is ungrammatical: 'Let me think' is a standalone phrase, and 'From my perspective' correctly expresses viewpoint. Also 'prefer to capture' is more natural than 'like to capture' when contrasting. Suggestion: split into two parts and use 'From my perspective' or 'In my opinion'.

× In rural areas, we can clearly see sunrise or sunset.

✓ In rural areas, we can clearly see the sunrise and the sunset.

When referring to specific phenomena like sunrise/sunset in general statements, use definite article 'the'. Also pairing 'and' is more natural than 'or' when making a general statement about both events. Suggestion: use 'the sunrise and the sunset' for clarity.

× Well, I live in India and India is India has beautiful places to visit and capture.

✓ Well, I live in India, and India has beautiful places to visit and photograph.

The original sentence has redundancy and a typographical duplication 'India is India has'. Remove the extra words and use 'photograph' or 'capture' without duplication. Also add a comma before the conjunction. Suggestion: write 'I live in India, and India has beautiful places to visit and photograph.'