Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love to taking picture in different view because every time I take the picture it's captured in my memory and furthermore I can use the picture talk to my friend about where I'm go or how it's beautiful so they can understand my my perspective and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer a view in Lulu earlier because I love to see a green grass and green tea that for me is look so pretty and beautiful. Furthermore, if I look at the something natural I feel it will create myself down and make me feel relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer real in my own country because I think my own country is have the best of nature. Will I have travel all along my country and see a lot of thing, but if I come in the same place tonight I always amazing.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: ปรับเรื่องไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนของประโยค เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ ไม่เกิน 3 ประโยค ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' ให้ถูกต้อง และหลีกเลี่ยงซ้ำคำ เช่น 'take the picture' กับ 'taking picture' ควรใช้รูปแบบที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'taking pictures' นอกจากนี้ให้ระวังการใช้ tense และรูปแบบ infinitive/gerund (to take / taking).
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help me remember the places I visit. For example, I often send pictures to my friends so they can see where I have been and understand my perspective. This makes me feel connected to them even when we are apart.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: ปรับความชัดเจนของคำตอบและการใช้คำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงโครงสร้างประโยค เริ่มด้วยประโยคตรงๆ เช่น 'I prefer rural areas' ตามด้วยเหตุผลเฉพาะเจาะจง ใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม (เช่น 'green fields' แทน 'green grass', 'calm' แทน 'create myself down') และเชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' เพื่อความลื่นไหลของคำตอบ
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love green fields and tea plantations. The peaceful natural scenery helps me relax and feel calm, so I often go to the countryside to unwind after a busy week.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: ปรับไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนของเหตุผล ให้ตอบตรงๆ ว่าชอบที่ไหนและอธิบายเหตุผลเป็นประโยคสั้นๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม (เช่น 'I prefer views in my own country because...' และ 'I have traveled all over my country'). หลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่สับสนหรือไม่สมบูรณ์ เช่น 'Will I have travel...' ควรใช้ tense ให้ถูกต้อง
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I believe it has the best natural scenery. I have traveled all over the country and I always find new places that amaze me, so I enjoy exploring familiar landscapes as well as discovering hidden spots.
× Yes, I love to taking picture in different view because every time I take the picture it's captured in my memory and furthermore I can use the picture talk to my friend about where I'm go or how it's beautiful so they can understand my my perspective and.
✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because every time I take a picture it's captured in my memory. Furthermore, I can use the pictures to tell my friends where I went or how beautiful it was so they can understand my perspective.
Errors involve incorrect use of infinitive 'to taking' (should be gerund 'taking') and missing plural forms 'pictures' and 'views'. Also phrase 'use the picture talk to my friend' is ungrammatical; use 'use the pictures to tell my friends'. Verb tense and pronouns corrected for clarity. Suggestions: use gerund after 'love' (love taking), use plural nouns when generalizing (pictures, views), use 'to tell' after 'use ... to'. Also corrected 'where I'm go' to past 'where I went' and 'how it's beautiful' to 'how beautiful it was' to match narrative past context.
× I prefer a view in Lulu earlier because I love to see a green grass and green tea that for me is look so pretty and beautiful.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love seeing green grass and tea fields; to me they look very pretty and beautiful.
Original has wrong preposition and place name confusion ('in Lulu earlier' unclear) and article misuse 'a green grass'. Corrected to 'in rural areas' assuming meaning, changed 'love to see' to 'love seeing' (gerund after 'love'), removed unnecessary article before uncountable noun 'grass', and 'green tea' likely intended 'tea fields'. Use 'to me they look' -> 'to me they look' simplified. Suggestions: choose correct preposition for location ('in'), use gerund for preference, and treat uncountable nouns without 'a'.
× Furthermore, if I look at the something natural I feel it will create myself down and make me feel relaxed.
✓ Furthermore, if I look at something natural I feel it calms me down and makes me feel relaxed.
Incorrect article 'the something natural' should be 'something natural'. 'Create myself down' is ungrammatical; use 'calms me down'. Subject-verb agreement adjusted: 'make me feel' -> 'makes me feel'. Suggestions: drop unnecessary definite article with 'something', use correct verb phrases like 'calm someone down', and ensure verbs agree with subject.
× I prefer a view in Lulu earlier because I love to see a green grass and green tea that for me is look so pretty and beautiful.
✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I love seeing green grass and tea fields; to me they look very pretty and beautiful.
(Same as earlier) 'in Lulu earlier' is wrong preposition/phrase; use 'in rural areas' or specific place. 'a green grass' incorrect article with uncountable noun. 'green tea' likely intended 'tea fields'. Use 'seeing' after 'love'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions and articles, and accurate nouns for intended meaning.
× I prefer real in my own country because I think my own country is have the best of nature.
✓ I prefer reality in my own country because I think my country has the best natural scenery.
Several issues: 'prefer real' unclear—likely 'prefer to stay/travel in my own country' or 'prefer it in my own country'; 'is have' is wrong: auxiliary 'is' + base verb 'have' should be 'has'. Also 'the best of nature' awkward; 'the best natural scenery' is clearer. Suggestions: use correct verb form 'has' for present simple with singular subject, and choose clearer nouns ('scenery').
× Will I have travel all along my country and see a lot of thing, but if I come in the same place tonight I always amazing.
✓ I have traveled all around my country and seen a lot of things, and when I return to the same place I am always amazed.
Original mixes future 'Will I have' incorrectly and uses base verbs instead of past participles. Corrected to present perfect 'have traveled' and 'seen' to express experiences up to now. 'a lot of thing' corrected to plural 'things'. 'if I come in the same place tonight I always amazing' corrected to 'when I return to the same place I am always amazed' with proper tense and adjective form. Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences, use past participles 'traveled', 'seen', pluralize 'things', and use correct adjective 'amazed' with verb 'be'.