Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating synonyms and fix grammar (e.g., "it also an unforgettable moment it represents").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each place holds unique memories and atmospheres. For example, a coastal sunset can remind me of family holidays, while a quiet mountain scene feels peaceful; these moments are worth keeping as photographs.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and avoid vague lists. Give one clear preference or say you like both but explain with specific examples and linking words (e.g., "however", "because"). Correct grammar: "I prefer both areas" or "I prefer rural areas because...".

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views because they offer different experiences. For instance, cities provide dynamic architecture and street life, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and traditional customs, so each type of view is memorable for different reasons.

Gợi ý: Clarify the main point and fix sentence structure. Avoid confusing comparisons and repetition. Choose a clear stance (prefer own country but appreciate others) and support it with specific examples and linking words like "however" or "also".

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes, such as beaches, lakes and mountains, that I find especially beautiful. However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its peacefulness and unique cultural features, so I appreciate both.

× I do like taking pictures of different views because each place has different memories, different vibes, different atmospheres and it also an unforgettable moment it represents.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views because each place has different memories, vibes, and atmospheres, and it also represents an unforgettable moment.

This sentence contains sentence structure problems and incorrect use of conjunctions: 'and it also an unforgettable moment it represents' is ungrammatical and redundant. I corrected word order to 'it also represents an unforgettable moment' and removed duplicated words and excessive commas. Suggestion: keep parallel lists concise (memories, vibes, and atmospheres) and follow subject-verb order (subject + verb + object).

× I preferred the both areas because both areas gives new atmosphere, new culture, traditions, the vibes and most importantly, it represents an unforgettable moment in that specific area.

✓ I prefer both areas because both areas give a new atmosphere, new cultures, traditions, and vibes, and most importantly, they represent an unforgettable moment in that specific area.

Original uses past tense 'preferred' though question asks general preference; present simple 'prefer' is appropriate. 'gives' is wrong due to subject-verb agreement with plural 'areas' — should be 'give'. Also 'the both areas' is incorrect; use 'both areas'. 'new culture' should be plural 'new cultures' to match 'both areas'. I changed 'it represents' to 'they represent' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: use present simple for general preferences, match subject number with verb, and keep parallel nouns in correct number.

× I do prefer our own country because in our country I can see beach, river, lake, mountains, volcanoes that is amazingly beautiful in other countries.

✓ I prefer our own country because there I can see beaches, rivers, lakes, mountains, and volcanoes that are amazingly beautiful.

Use of 'do prefer' is unnecessary; simple present 'prefer' is better. 'in our country I can see beach, river, lake' lacks articles/plural forms — use plural 'beaches, rivers, lakes' or add articles. Relative clause 'that is amazingly beautiful in other countries' is confusing and incorrect agreement: 'that are amazingly beautiful' matches plural antecedents. I removed 'in other countries' because it contradicted preference for own country; if intended, rephrase for contrast. Suggestion: use simple present, pluralize countable nouns when listing generally, and ensure verb agrees with plural subjects.

× I also like the other countries because it it has a peaceful scenery.

✓ I also like other countries because they have peaceful scenery.

The sentence has a repeated word 'it it' and incorrect pronoun 'it' referring to 'countries' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'have'. 'Scenery' is uncountable, so use without article or use 'a peaceful scene' for singular. Suggestion: avoid repetition, match pronouns and verbs to the number of the noun, and choose correct countable/uncountable noun forms.