Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ не очень естественен и содержит запинки и повторения. Надо начать с чётного тематического предложения, убрать заполняющие слова (uh) и конкретизировать, почему вам нравятся такие снимки — добавить детали (например, свет, цвет, атмосфера). Ограничьте ответ до 2–4 предложений и используйте связки для плавности.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing beaches and overseas landscapes because the light and colors there are very striking. For example, I like to capture the way the sun reflects on the water and the different textures of sand and rocks.

Gợi ý: Ответ повторяет предыдущую мысль и содержит повторы и запинки. Нужно начать с прямого предложения, убрать повторы, объяснить причину более конкретно (например, спокойствие, чистый воздух, unique landscapes) и использовать связку для пояснения. Держите ответ в пределах 2–4 предложений.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I find them more peaceful and visually interesting. The open landscapes and natural details often stay with me for weeks and inspire new photo ideas.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит запинки, грамматические ошибки и неправильные слова («sky crab scraps»). Лучше начать с чёткой предпочтительной позиции, объяснить причину конкретно (например, архитектура, skyline, modern design) и использовать корректную лексику. Избегайте разговорных вставок и постарайтесь не делать орфографических ошибок в речи. 2–3 предложения будут достаточны.

Ví dụ: I prefer views of other cities because their modern architecture and distinctive skylines interest me. Living in the city centre makes me curious about different urban designs and tall buildings in other places.

× I love the pictures of beaches and kinds of, uh, overseas pictures, uh, like it illustrates the nature.

✓ I love pictures of beaches and kinds of overseas scenes because they illustrate nature.

The phrase 'the pictures of beaches' uses an unnecessary definite article; 'pictures of beaches' is more natural. 'Kinds of, uh, overseas pictures' is ungrammatical and redundant; replace with 'kinds of overseas scenes' or simply 'overseas scenes'. 'It illustrates the nature' is incorrect because 'it' is unclear and 'illustrate nature' requires a plural subject; use 'they illustrate nature'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, avoid filler words, and ensure subject and verb agree. Grammar problem type ID:14

× As I said before, I like nature pictures and I of course, uh, prefer rural rural areas and picture because it stayed with me for weeks.

✓ As I said before, I like nature pictures and I, of course, prefer rural areas and rural scenes because they stay with me for weeks.

This sentence has several structural issues: repeated word 'rural rural', misplaced 'of course', and incorrect tense/agreement in 'it stayed with me'. 'Picture' should be plural or 'scenes'. Change 'it stayed' to 'they stay' to match plural subject and present continuity. Rearranged to 'I, of course, prefer' for natural adverb placement. Suggestion: remove repetition, place adverbs close to the verb, and match subject number with verb tense. Grammar problem type ID:26

× To be honest, I live in the heart of the city and I like more uh views of another cities because there are more modern and they have a sky crab scraps buildings.

✓ To be honest, I live in the heart of the city and I prefer views of other cities because they are more modern and have skyscraper buildings.

Errors: 'like more uh views of another cities' mixes singular/plural and uses wrong determiner; use 'other cities' or 'another city'. 'There are more modern' is incomplete: needs a noun after 'more modern' or rephrase to 'they are more modern'. 'Sky crab scraps buildings' is garbled; likely meant 'skyscraper buildings' or 'skyscrapers'. Also 'have skyscraper buildings' is redundant; better 'they have skyscrapers'. Suggestion: use correct plural/determiner ('other cities'), complete comparative clauses, and use correct vocabulary ('skyscrapers'). Grammar problem type ID:12