Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Which are taking solutions yes, I like taking pictures of different views. I like uh, some uh, happiness, meal happiness, momentous click happy, happy moments and uh spending time uh, bring spending time with friends and uh doing exploring new things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I'm prep reviewing water because in the rural area is very environment is very peaceful of fresh air. We are they are I feel very refreshed and outside the urban areas with you like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer both views in my own country and other countries. I because I really like travelling and explore new areas so I want explore my country and other countries.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetitions, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Focus on natural phrasing and correct grammar.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes because they capture special moods, and I like sharing these pictures with friends when we travel.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: Answer the choice clearly (urban or rural), give a reason and one specific detail. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct basic grammar and word order.
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the environment is peaceful and the air is fresh. For example, I enjoy photographing wide fields and forests, which make me feel relaxed and refreshed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Keep the answer focused: state your preference clearly, explain why with a reason and a brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense/grammar.
Ví dụ: I like views in both my country and abroad because I enjoy traveling and discovering new places. For instance, I photograph local landmarks at home and different landscapes abroad to learn about other cultures and scenery.
× Which are taking solutions yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
The original sentence has extra words and incorrect structure ('Which are taking solutions yes') that make it ungrammatical. Remove the unnecessary fragment and start with a clear affirmative response 'Yes' followed by the main clause. Suggestion: keep answers concise and directly address the question.
× I like uh, some uh, happiness, meal happiness, momentous click happy, happy moments and uh spending time uh, bring spending time with friends and uh doing exploring new things.
✓ I like capturing happy moments, spending time with friends, and exploring new things.
The sentence uses repeated fillers ('uh') and awkward adjective phrases ('meal happiness, momentous click happy') that are not standard English. Consolidate into clear noun phrases: 'capturing happy moments' and parallel gerund phrases 'spending' and 'exploring'. Remove redundant words and ensure parallel structure. Suggest practicing planning short, clear phrases before speaking.
× I'm prep reviewing water because in the rural area is very environment is very peaceful of fresh air.
✓ I prefer rural areas because the environment there is very peaceful and the air is fresh.
Multiple errors: 'prep reviewing water' is unintelligible; 'in the rural area is very environment is very peaceful of fresh air' misuses prepositions and word order. Use 'prefer rural areas' and 'the environment there is very peaceful and the air is fresh.' Ensure correct prepositions ('in' not needed before 'rural areas' in this structure) and clear subject-verb order. Practice forming simple comparative statements.
× We are they are I feel very refreshed and outside the urban areas with you like.
✓ I feel very refreshed outside urban areas.
The original mixes pronouns ('we are they are I') and adds extraneous phrases ('with you like') producing confusion. Choose a single subject ('I') and a concise predicate. Remove unnecessary pronouns and filler words. Practice speaking in single-subject sentences.
× I'm prep reviewing water because in the rural area is very environment is very peaceful of fresh air. We are they are I feel very refreshed and outside the urban areas with you like.
✓ I prefer rural areas because the environment is peaceful and the air is fresh, so I feel refreshed there.
This combines previous fragments into one coherent sentence. The original had poor structure and redundancy. Use conjunctions correctly ('so') to connect cause and effect and maintain subject-verb agreement. Aim for clear cause-result sentences.
× I prefer both views in my own country and other countries.
✓ I prefer both views in my own country and in other countries.
The original sentence is understandable but missing a parallel preposition before 'other countries.' Adding 'in' maintains parallel structure: 'in my own country and in other countries.' Ensure parallel prepositional phrases.
× I because I really like travelling and explore new areas so I want explore my country and other countries.
✓ Because I really like traveling and exploring new areas, I want to explore my country and other countries.
The sentence lacks correct parallel verb forms. Use 'traveling and exploring' (both gerunds) for parallelism. Also insert 'to' before the final 'explore' or use 'want to explore.' The corrected version uses gerunds and 'want to explore' for proper infinitive usage. Suggest practicing parallel verb structures and using 'want to' before infinitives.