Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid repetition, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") and specific examples (e.g., which mountain or beach) to make your answer more coherent. Keep it under five sentences and correct minor grammar (e.g., "I take pictures of scenic views, especially mountains and coastal plains, with my phone").

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of scenic views. For example, I often photograph mountains and coastal plains because my phone has an excellent camera. When I travel with family or friends, I take photos to capture joyful moments and remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly which you prefer, then explain with two clear supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" or "however"). Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use specific details about features you like in each area (shops, traffic, fields, farms). Keep sentences grammatical and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they feel peaceful and show natural landscapes such as fields and farms. However, I also enjoy urban scenes for their energy and architecture, like busy streets and public transport. Overall, I usually choose the countryside when I want to relax and the city when I want to feel inspired.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, then give two specific reasons with linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing; use proper grammar (e.g., "I have never been abroad"). Mention particular places or cultural features to make the answer more concrete. Keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I have never been abroad and India offers a wide variety of landscapes and cultures. For example, I enjoy photographing the Himalayan foothills and coastal beaches, and I like how local traditions make each region unique.

× Yes, I do like to take pictures of different scenic views especially some mountainous area with different coastal plains with my phone.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenic views, especially mountainous areas and coastal plains, with my phone.

Use of 'do like to take' is wordy; 'like taking' is natural. 'Some mountainous area' should be plural 'mountainous areas' to match 'coastal plains'. Also reorder phrases for clarity and add commas. Use of gerund 'taking' fits habitual preference.

× Especially as I have upgraded phone with the perfect camera and I use it for the many of the times when with my family and clicking pictures together with my friends that shows a joyful meanings and it is sometimes it usually helps us to.

✓ I have an upgraded phone with a great camera, and I use it often when I am with my family and friends to take pictures that show joyful moments; it usually helps us relax.

Missing article 'an' before 'upgraded phone' and awkward noun phrases. 'the many of the times' incorrect; use 'often'. 'when with my family and clicking pictures together with my friends' lacks subjects and verbs; correct to 'when I am with my family and friends to take pictures'. 'shows a joyful meanings' has number and count errors; use 'show joyful moments'. Remove redundant words 'sometimes it usually' and choose 'usually'. This addresses pronoun and sentence structure issues.

× Yes, I do like to see different views from the urban areas and rural areas.

✓ Yes, I like to see different views in urban and rural areas.

Redundant use of 'the' and pluralization 'areas' twice is unnecessary. Use 'in urban and rural areas' for concision. Also 'do like' is wordy; simple 'like' is preferred.

× As urban areas shows modern society, how the country how the country is changing and developing modern society without a lot of skyscrapers, some public transport running on the roads with the busy people areas.

✓ Urban areas show modern society and how the country is changing and developing, with skyscrapers, public transport running on the roads, and busy streets.

Subject 'urban areas' is plural, so verb must be 'show' not 'shows'. The original sentence repeats phrases and lacks parallel structure. Reorder to list features of urban areas clearly and correct article and noun usage.

× While in the countryside areas, it shows how the modern life with the conventional ways people are living with and how they produce different kinds of.

✓ In the countryside, life is more traditional; people live in conventional ways and produce different kinds of goods.

Original has unclear subject 'it shows' and incomplete clause 'produce different kinds of'. Change to clear subject 'life' and complete the idea 'produce different kinds of goods'. Remove redundant 'areas' after 'countryside'.

× I prefer to see views from my own country as I never been to any different kind of different kind of worlds or any countryside 'cause my country is consistent of a lot of scenic views with some different culture and traditions that shows diversity of variations and help us to meet new kind of peoples.

✓ I prefer to see views in my own country because I have never been to other countries or foreign countryside, and my country consists of many scenic places with diverse cultures and traditions that show variety and help us meet different kinds of people.

Use present perfect 'have never been' instead of 'never been'. Remove repeated 'different kind of'. Use 'consists of' not 'consistent of'. 'shows' should be 'show' to agree with plural 'cultures and traditions'. 'new kind of peoples' is uncountable/incorrect; use 'different kinds of people'. Also adjust 'cause' to 'because' for formality.

× And moreover it just shows how incredible is in India with the whole natural.

✓ Moreover, it shows how incredible India is, with its natural beauty.

Awkward word order 'how incredible is in India' should be 'how incredible India is'. 'the whole natural' is incorrect; use 'its natural beauty'. Remove redundant 'and' before 'moreover'.