Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và mạch văn: Tránh dùng thì sai (ví dụ “did” không phù hợp), loại bỏ từ thừa và lặp từ, và trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung chi tiết ngắn gọn. Hãy dùng tối đa 3–4 câu, kết hợp liên từ đơn giản để mạch văn tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually photograph only scenes I find beautiful, such as sunsets or interesting cityscapes, because they help me remember special moments. I don’t take photos of everything; I choose scenes that really catch my eye.

Gợi ý: Giảm lỗi nói lắp và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: Loại bỏ tiếng ậm ừ, tránh lặp từ, và sử dụng liên từ để so sánh (for example, "while" hoặc "but"). Trình bày lý do cụ thể hơn cho mỗi lựa chọn trong 2–3 câu ngắn gọn.

Ví dụ: I prefer both urban and rural views because they offer different benefits. Urban views help me relax and clear my mind with vibrant streets and cafes, while rural views motivate me to be productive thanks to the peaceful landscapes and fresh air.

Gợi ý: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn chỉnh câu: Tránh lẫn thì và thiếu từ, sắp xếp ý theo cấu trúc rõ ràng (câu chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ/nguyện vọng). Nên đưa ra thông tin cụ thể (ví dụ tên địa danh) và kết thúc câu hoàn chỉnh.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has many beautiful sights across its provinces. For example, I’d love to visit Ha Long Bay and Sapa someday. I haven’t traveled everywhere yet, but if I have the chance I want to explore the whole country.

× 'Yes, I did, but always only the beautiful views that I wanna check, I take it. And yeah, I I think that's all.'

✓ 'Yes, I do, but only the beautiful views that I want to check; I take them. And yeah, I think that's all.'

'Student used past tense "did" incorrectly when speaking about a general habit; present simple "do" is required. "wanna" is informal and should be "want to". Pronoun "it" is incorrect for plural "views", use "them". Remove repeated filler "I". Suggestion: use present simple for habits, use standard forms (want to), and match pronouns to plural nouns.'

× 'I prefer both because urban areas make me feel like uh, relax and clear my mind, but rural areas have me have, umm, motivate, motivated to try to try to work.'

✓ 'I prefer both because urban areas make me feel relaxed and clear my mind, but rural areas motivate me to try to work.'

'Original has incorrect verb forms: "make me feel like relax" should be adjective "relaxed" after "feel". "have me have ... motivate, motivated" is ungrammatical; correct structure is "rural areas motivate me". Remove fillers and duplicated words. Suggestion: use adjective after "feel", and use subject + verb + object order (rural areas motivate me).'

× 'I prefer views in my country because you know Vietnam we have has many beautiful sights in every province and I haven't travel all the province but if I have a chance I will travel all the country to see the.'

✓ 'I prefer views in my country because, you know, Vietnam has many beautiful sights in every province and I haven't traveled to all the provinces, but if I have a chance I will travel around the country to see them.'

'Errors include incorrect auxiliary with present simple: "we have has" should be "Vietnam has". "haven't travel" should be present perfect "haven't traveled" and requires "to" for destination (traveled to all the provinces). "all the province" needs plural "provinces". "travel all the country" should be "travel around the country". Missing object pronoun for "see" - use "see them". Suggestion: ensure correct verb forms (has, have/has + past participle), use preposition "to" with travel, pluralize nouns, and include appropriate pronouns.'