Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I go to the garden" not "I went"). Avoid repeating phrases like "I do" twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax. For example, when I go to the local botanical garden I usually take my DSLR to capture flowers and ponds, which calms me and improves my photography skills.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer into a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "I'm the kind of person who prefers rural views"), use singular/plural agreement and avoid sentence fragments. Provide one or two concrete examples (e.g., parks, fields) to support your view.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because green spaces are more relaxing than busy cities. For instance, I like walking through open fields or quiet country lanes where there are fewer people and less noise, which helps me unwind.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise answer and use correct tense and pronouns. Start with a topic sentence stating your current preference, then briefly explain change with specific reasons and a linking word (e.g., "however" or "but"). Avoid vague phrases and correct grammar (e.g., "When I was a child, I was mesmerized by my country's scenery").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries now because traveling has broadened my interests. For example, as a child I loved my country's landscapes, but when I was a teenager I became curious about foreign architecture and coastal scenery, so I enjoy discovering new places abroad.

× Yes I do, I do like taking pictures of different views since it reduces my stress.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking pictures of different views because they reduce my stress.

The original mixes present simple with incorrect singular agreement: 'it reduces' refers to 'pictures' (plural), so use 'they reduce'. Also split into two sentences for clarity and use 'because' instead of 'since' to avoid ambiguity. Use a comma after 'Yes' and a period after 'do'.

× Every time I went to the garden I usually bring my DSLR camera.

✓ Every time I go to the garden I usually bring my DSLR camera.

The sentence mixes past ('went') with present habitual 'usually bring'. For habitual actions use present simple 'go'. Ensure consistent tense: 'Every time I go... I usually bring...'.

× I'm kind of person that mourn into a view of rural areas since the green spaces reduces my stress rather than the urban areas.

✓ I'm the kind of person who is drawn to views of rural areas because green spaces reduce my stress more than urban areas do.

Multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'kind of person' and incorrect relative pronoun 'that' should be 'who'. 'Mourn into a view' is incorrect idiom; use 'is drawn to' or 'prefer'. 'Reduces' should be 'reduce' to agree with plural 'green spaces'. Use 'because' and 'more than urban areas do' for comparison. This correction addresses pronoun and agreement errors and clarifies meaning.

× Who has such a crowded scene.

✓ Urban areas have such crowded scenes.

Original is a sentence fragment beginning with 'Who' and lacks a subject. Replace with a complete sentence 'Urban areas have such crowded scenes' to identify the subject and verb and match context.

× A lot of people and noises I prefer to.

✓ There are a lot of people and noise, which I do not prefer.

Original word order is incorrect and 'noises' should be 'noise' (uncountable). Use 'There are' to introduce existence and add a relative clause 'which I do not prefer' to show preference. This fixes pronoun/reference and sentence structure.

× Pick when I was a child I was always being mesmerized by my country's views.

✓ Back when I was a child, I was always mesmerized by my country's views.

'Pick' is incorrect here; likely intended 'Back' or 'When'. 'Being mesmerized' is wordy; simple past 'was mesmerized' is correct. Add comma after introductory phrase. This corrects sentence structure and tense.

× By the time I reach my teenagers ages I started to curious about the outside of the country views.

✓ By the time I reached my teenage years, I became curious about views outside my country.

Tense inconsistency: 'By the time I reach' (present) conflicts with 'I started' (past). Use past throughout: 'reached' and 'became'. 'Teenagers ages' is ungrammatical; use 'teenage years'. 'Started to curious' should be 'became curious'. Also shorten 'outside of the country views' to 'views outside my country'.

× So yeah, I prefer other countries views.

✓ So, I prefer the views of other countries.

Use article 'the' before 'views' and possessive form 'of other countries' or 'other countries' views' should be 'other countries' views' with apostrophe but better as 'the views of other countries'. Maintain present tense 'prefer'. Add comma after 'So'.