Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and fluency: remove repetitions and fix verb forms. Keep answer concise (max 5 sentences). Add a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details using linking words. Be specific about what you photograph and why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially natural landscapes. For example, I often take photos of forests and rivers because I like the colours and calm atmosphere. I also edit a few favourite shots and share them on social media to get feedback from friends.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add linking words to make the reasoning smoother and include a brief personal example or result to make it more specific. Keep sentences varied and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I live in a city and want to photograph different scenery. For instance, I often capture mountains and lakes, which are more peaceful and visually striking than busy streets, so my photos usually have a calmer mood.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and phrasing: avoid repetition of "different" and plural errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar scenery and cultural variety. For example, photographing traditional markets or coastal villages abroad helps me learn about local customs and produces more interesting images than the everyday scenes at home.

× Of course I enjoying I enjoy photographing different views.

✓ Of course I enjoy photographing different views.

The student used 'enjoying' where the base form 'enjoy' is required after the subject 'I'. Use the simple present 'I enjoy' to match the habitual action. Remove the duplicate 'enjoying' and keep 'I enjoy photographing different views.'

× Especially on nature scenes and also I would like to share my favorite shot on social media so that I.

✓ I especially enjoy photographing natural scenes, and I would like to share my favorite shots on social media.

The original sentence is fragmented and ends abruptly. Reorder for clarity: 'especially' modifies what is enjoyed, use 'natural scenes' (adjective + noun), plural 'shots' fits general habit, and complete the second clause. This fixes sentence structure and provides a complete idea.

× I prefer the views in rural areas because I live in an urban area and want to photograph different scenery.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live in an urban area and want to photograph different scenery.

The definite article 'the' before 'views' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence natural for general preference. 'Different scenery' is fine as uncountable.

× For example, I enjoy capturing mountains and lakes because they feel more peaceful and visually interesting than city streets.

✓ For example, I enjoy capturing mountains and lakes because they feel more peaceful and visually interesting than city streets do.

Comparison to 'city streets' is fine, but adding 'do' at the end clarifies the comparison and improves fluency. This addresses implicit verb repetition in comparisons.

× I prefer the views in different countries because the view in my own country I can see it every day.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because the views in my own country I can see every day.

Use 'other countries' instead of 'different countries' for comparison, and remove the definite article 'the' before 'views' for general statement. Also make 'view' plural to match 'see every day' and maintain subject consistency.

× So I would like to photograph different views in different countries and also I can learn different culture, different peoples.

✓ So I would like to photograph views in other countries and also learn about different cultures and peoples.

Use 'other countries' for contrast, 'learn about' is the correct collocation, and 'cultures' should be plural; 'peoples' is correct for groups of ethnicities but use together with 'cultures' for clarity.

× It makes me feel happy.

✓ It makes me happy.

Both forms are acceptable, but 'It makes me happy' is more natural and concise in this context. This simplifies sentence structure while preserving meaning.