Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and filler words, correct small mistakes (e.g. "ang" → "angles"), produce a clear topic sentence then one or two concise supporting details. Aim for natural phrasing and avoid repetition. Use one linking phrase when adding a reason (e.g. "because" or "so").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I like exploring various angles. For example, I often shoot from low and high positions to make ordinary scenes look more interesting.

Gợi ý: Use accurate vocabulary (e.g. "greenery" not "greenies") and simplify the sentence to avoid awkward grammar. Give a concise reason and one specific example to support the preference. Reduce hesitations and remove unnecessary phrases.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and full of greenery. For instance, I often photograph fields and old trees which create softer, more natural compositions than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Make the response grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a direct statement, then give a brief specific example (e.g. Switzerland) and explain why with one clear reason. Avoid conditional confusion and excessive hesitations.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling offers unique landscapes you can't find at home. For example, Switzerland's mountains and lakes create spectacular photo opportunities that are very different from the scenery in my country.

× I do like taking pictures, uh, of different views because I love the ang.

✓ I do like taking pictures of different views because I love the angles.

The original used 'ang' which is likely a misspelling of 'angle' and singular 'angle' is unnatural when referring to multiple viewpoints; use the plural 'angles'. Also removed filler 'uh' and extra commas for clarity.

× I love to take pictures from different angles and different corners so that, uh, the, the scenario of the picture may get umm, aesthetic.

✓ I love to take pictures from different angles and corners so that the scene in the picture becomes more aesthetic.

Replace awkward phrase 'the scenario of the picture may get aesthetic' with 'the scene in the picture becomes more aesthetic' for correct sentence structure and natural collocation. Removed fillers and duplicated words.

× I prefer rural areas for taking pictures because rural areas are calm and quiet and full of greenies, uh, so that if anyone, uh, who want to take picture, umm, they can get pick, get some aesthetic pictures, uh, with.

✓ I prefer rural areas for taking pictures because they are calm, quiet, and full of greenery, so anyone who wants to take pictures can get some aesthetic shots.

Multiple issues: 'greenies' is incorrect — use 'greenery' (uncountable noun) and 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with 'anyone' (singular). 'Take picture' needs plural 'take pictures'. Removed redundant words 'get pick, get' and rearranged for natural word order.

× I prefer view in another countries because, umm, like we uh, if we take an example of Switzerland, it's the most beautiful, umm, location I have ever seen.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because, for example, if we take Switzerland, it's the most beautiful place I have ever seen.

Use plural 'views' and 'other countries' (not 'another countries'). 'Take an example of' is unnatural; use 'for example' or 'if we take'. 'Location' is less natural here than 'place'. Removed fillers and adjusted articles.

× Uh, if we can, we had uh, have the privilege to take photos, the pictures will be tremendously beautiful.

✓ If we have the opportunity to take photos, the pictures will be tremendously beautiful.

Original mixes tenses and auxiliaries ('can', 'had', 'have') causing confusion. Use 'have the opportunity' (present conditional) to match the hypothetical condition. This yields a clear conditional sentence and correct verb forms.