Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap akıcı değil ve fazla dolgu kelime (umm, uh) içeriyor. Ayrıca bazı kelime seçimleri yanlış ("waves" ve "alternative" bağlam dışı) ve cümle yapısı dağınık. Daha doğal olmak için ana fikri kısa ve doğrudan belirleyin, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve doğru kelimeyi kullanın (ör. "views", "places"). Bağlayıcı bir ikinci cümleyle neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi somut bir örnekle destekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often bring my camera to national parks because I love capturing landscapes and wildlife, such as mountains at sunrise. For example, last summer I photographed a valley at golden hour, which highlighted the colours and textures.

Gợi ý: Cevap net ve doğrudan, ancak bazı kelime kullanımları ve detaylar geliştirilmelidir. "Wild animals" ile "cats and dogs" çelişiyor; bunlar yaban hayvanı sayılmaz. Daha uygun örnekler (kuşlar, geyikler) kullanın ve bir bağlaçla neden tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın. Ayrıca iki kısa cümle yeterli; gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery and wildlife. For instance, I enjoy photographing birds and deer among green fields, which provides peaceful and varied compositions.

Gợi ý: Cümlede anlam belirsizliği ve yanlış kelime kullanımı var ("weaves" yerine "views"). Ayrıca düşünce dağınık ve amaç net değil. Cevabı doğrudan verin (own country), kısa bir gerekçe sunun ve bir örnekle destekleyin (ör. belirli manzara veya kültürel özellik). Dolgu ifadelerini çıkarın ve mantıksal bağlayıcı kullanın.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm proud of its landscapes and culture. For example, our coastal cliffs and historic towns showcase unique scenery that I would recommend to tourists visiting in the future.

× In my leisure times, I would take my umm, camera in order to take photographs of different waves because I, I am obsessed with umm, taking pictures of alternative, umm, places such as, uh, national parks, uh, because of saying.

✓ In my leisure time, I take my camera to photograph different views because I am obsessed with taking pictures of various places, such as national parks.

The phrase 'leisure times' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun 'leisure time'. 'Would take' sounds conditional; use simple present 'take' to state a habitual action. 'Waves' is wrong contextually; 'views' fits the question. 'Alternative places' is unnatural; use 'various places'. Remove filler words. Improve sentence flow by using concise vocabulary and present simple for habits. Suggestion: Practice using uncountable nouns (leisure time) and present simple for routines; replace vague adjectives with specific ones (various, different, or specific place names).

× I would definitely prefer to take pictures of rural areas because I like the picture of the wild animals such as birds, cats and dogs, and I would like to see the green spaces in my rural area.

✓ I definitely prefer taking pictures of rural areas because I like pictures of wild animals such as birds, cats and dogs, and I enjoy seeing green spaces in the countryside.

Use gerund 'taking' after 'prefer' when stating a general preference. 'I like the picture' is incorrect; use plural 'pictures' or 'a picture' depending on meaning. 'My rural area' is odd when speaking generally; use 'the countryside'. Also avoid 'would' which implies conditional; use simple present for preferences. Suggestion: Use 'prefer + -ing' for general preferences and ensure noun forms match (singular vs plural).

× I would prefer weaves in my own country because I would definitely recommend my own country to this tourists who will come and to see in the future so that, umm, tourist hotspots would uh, improve the, uh, tourist destinations, uh, in my country.

✓ I would prefer views in my own country because I would definitely recommend it to tourists who come in the future so that tourist hotspots and destinations in my country will improve.

'Weaves' is a misspelling of 'views'. 'This tourists' is incorrect; use 'tourists' or 'these tourists' depending on context. Redundant phrasing 'who will come and to see' should be 'who come in the future' or 'who visit'. Use 'will improve' rather than 'would improve' to express likely future improvement. Also replace 'my own country' repetition with pronoun 'it' to avoid redundancy. Suggestion: Check spelling, use correct pronouns for previously mentioned nouns, and choose appropriate future tense for predictions.