Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然但有过多犹豫词和重复，语句较短且信息量有限。建议：1) 去掉“uh/umm”等填充词，保持流畅；2) 用一到两句补充具体细节（拍摄内容或目的）；3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯，例如 because / so / which means。举例练习并计时，控制在不超过5句话内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me capture memorable moments. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes to remember the colours and atmosphere, and I later review these photos to relive those experiences.

Gợi ý: 回答表达清楚偏好但充满犹豫和重复，语法和时态有小错误（e.g. "it make" 应为 "it makes"；“That made me”时态不一致）。建议：1) 消除填充词，使用连词（because, while, so）组织对比；2) 注意主谓一致和时态一致；3) 添加一两个具体感受或细节（例如声音、气味、活动）。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because urban areas usually have tall buildings and noise, which makes me feel stressed. In the countryside I can see high mountains, green trees and a clear blue sky, so I feel relaxed and happier.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体但表达重复且含犹豫词，表述不够精炼。建议：1) 去除重复与填充词，直接给出原因；2) 用更具体的描述（比如地貌、文化特色或举例场景）；3) 使用连接词（for example, such as）使句子更流畅并在最多五句内完成回答。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, Yunnan has dramatic mountain scenery while Xinjiang features vast deserts and unique landforms, so each province feels distinct and interesting.

× it make me feel stressed

✓ it makes me feel stressed

这是主谓一致错误。主语“it”为第三人称单数，谓语动词必须加 -s。改为“makes”。建议：复习第三人称单数的一般现在时用法，遇到 he/she/it 或单数名词时动词加 -s。

× That made me very happy.

✓ That makes me very happy.

原句用过去时“made”与上下文一般现在时的叙述不一致（学生在描述通常感受）。应使用一般现在时“makes”。建议：叙述习惯性或一般事实时用一般现在时。

× I prefer views in our own country.

✓ I prefer views in my own country.

“our”含有“我们”的意思，但说话者应当使用第一人称单数所属“my”来表示个人偏好。建议：表达个人偏好或所属时使用“my”；只有表示代表团体时用“our”。

× In Yunnan province and Xinjiang province, we can see high mountains and the shape of the ground is, uh, different from everywhere, and we can see different, uh, uh, views in different provinces.

✓ In Yunnan Province and Xinjiang Province, we can see high mountains, and the landscape is different from other places; we can see different views in different provinces.

存在几个问题：1) 专有地名中“Province”首字母应大写；2) 冗长且口语重复，需简化；3) “the shape of the ground is different from everywhere” 表达不自然，改为“the landscape is different from other places”；4) 标点和句子连贯性需改善。建议：地名首字母大写，使用“landscape”或“terrain”更自然，避免重复词。

× I can umm, do the uh, I can record uh, these things and uh, see it again.

✓ I can take photos to record these scenes and see them again.

原句有动词重复“I can... I can...”且指代不清“these things”“it”。需用更自然的表达：take photos/record these scenes，并保持代词一致（复数用 them）。建议：避免不必要的重复，使用明确名词并保证代词与先行词数一致。