Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like take photos of different view and I really into trip. I like kinds of different screen and and take it up.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer wheels in rural area because rural areas is natural screen and the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I like my own country because it has 960 kilometers, it's very large and that have a different kinds of screens like river, sea, mountains and so on.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法和词汇错误,表达不自然且有重复。回答应直接回应问题并使用主题句,然后用1–2个具体细节支持。注意动词形式(take → taking/take)、冠词和复数形式,避免重复词(screen不适合景色)。可用连接词简洁衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often photograph landscapes and cityscapes when I travel, because capturing light and composition makes the scenes more memorable.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: 答案不清楚,词汇使用错误(wheels, screen不合适),语法问题(主谓不一致、冠词使用)且句子未完整。应直接表明偏好并给出1–2个具体原因,用连接词如“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside offers more natural scenery like fields, forests and rivers, which I find more relaxing and photogenic.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答包含不相关或错误的细节(“960 kilometers”未说明指什么),语法有问题(时态和数一致性),用词不准确(screens→scenery)。应先给出明确偏好,然后说明具体理由和例子,避免不必要的数字或提供背景说明。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has a wide variety of scenery, including rivers, seas and mountains, so I can enjoy many different landscapes without traveling far.
× Yes, I like take photos of different view and I really into trip. I like kinds of different screen and and take it up.
✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views and I'm really into travelling. I like different kinds of scenery and taking pictures of them.
句中动词搭配错误。英语中动词 'like' 后面常接动名词(verb + -ing),因此应为 'like taking' 而不是 'like take'。名词 'view' 表示单个景色,复数形式 'views' 更符合语境。'be really into' 后面要接名词或动名词,'trip' 通常指一次旅行,改为动名词或更自然的名词 'travelling'(旅行)更恰当。'kinds of different screen' 中 'screen' 用词错误,正确应为 'scenery'(风景);并且修正词序为 'different kinds of scenery'。最后 'and and take it up' 有重复连词且意思不明,改为 'and taking pictures of them' 更自然。建议:注意像 'like', 'be into' 这类动词后使用动名词,名词的单复数要根据语境选择,并使用正确词汇(scenery 而非 screen)。
× I like take photos of different view and I really into trip.
✓ I like taking photos of different views and I'm really into travelling.
原句中 'into' 前缺少系动词 'be',正确结构为 'be into' 表示喜欢某事。因此需用 'I'm really into …'。同时 'into trip' 用法不当,'into' 后需接名词或动名词,建议改为 'travelling' 或 'going on trips'。建议:注意固定搭配 'be into' 的正确结构。
× Yes, I like take photos of different view and I really into trip.
✓ Yes, I like taking photos of different views and I'm really into travelling.
名词 'view' 和 'trip' 在此语境中应使用复数形式或更自然的不可数形式。拍摄‘不同的风景’应为复数 'views';'into trip' 更自然改为 'into travelling'(不可数)或 'into going on trips'(复数)。建议:注意表示多样性或泛指时使用复数或合适的不可数名词。
× I prefer wheels in rural area because rural areas is natural screen and the.
✓ I prefer villages in rural areas because rural areas have natural scenery.
原句中 'prefer wheels' 词不当,可能想说 'places' 或 'villages';'in rural area' 缺少复数与冠词,通常说 'in rural areas'。'rural areas is' 主谓不一致,主语为复数应使用 'are' 或将结构改为 'rural area is'。'natural screen' 用词错误,应为 'natural scenery'。句末 'and the.' 不完整,应删除或补充。建议:使用正确名词(village/place/scenery),主谓一致(areas → are),并使用复数形式 'rural areas' 来泛指乡村地区。
× I prefer wheels in rural area because rural areas is natural screen and the.
✓ I prefer villages in rural areas because rural areas have natural scenery.
原句 'rural areas is' 中主语 'rural areas' 是复数,但用了单数动词 'is',应改为 'are' 或将主语改为单数。建议:判断主语是单数还是复数,从而选择正确的动词形式;如果要泛指多个地区,选择复数动词 'have'('rural areas have')。
× I prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Student: I like my own country because it has 960 kilometers, it's very large and that have a different kinds of screens like river, sea, mountains and so on.
✓ I like my own country because it is 960 kilometres wide; it's very large and it has different kinds of scenery like rivers, seas, mountains and so on.
句中时态与形式不准确。'it has 960 kilometers' 更自然表达为 'it is 960 kilometres wide'(表示宽度/面积);'that have a different kinds of screens' 主语与动词不一致且用词错误,应为 'it has different kinds of scenery'。名词 'river, sea, mountains' 应保持一致的数形式,如 'rivers, seas, mountains'。建议:用合适的句型描述国家面积/长度,保持主谓一致,并使用正确的名词(scenery)及复数形式以列举多种景观。
× it's very large and that have a different kinds of screens like river, sea, mountains and so on.
✓ it's very large and it has different kinds of scenery like rivers, seas, mountains and so on.
原句 'that have' 中 'that' 指代错误且主谓不一致;应使用 'it has' 来指代国家,'have' 要与复数主语一致。并且 'a different kinds' 不应同时使用不定冠词 'a' 与复数 'kinds',应为 'different kinds'。建议:保持代词指代一致并注意冠词与名词数一致。
× I like my own country because it has 960 kilometers, it's very large and that have a different kinds of screens like river, sea, mountains and so on.
✓ I like my own country because it is 960 kilometres wide; it's very large and it has different kinds of scenery like rivers, seas, mountains and so on.
原句中 'a different kinds' 同时出现不定冠词 'a' 与复数名词 'kinds',这是冠词使用错误。应删除 'a' 或改为单数结构。建议:复数名词前不加不定冠词,注意冠词与名词数的一致性。