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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, I like taking picture of different views such as the blue sky and the green tree and the sunset and so on. Uh, because the, the blue sky can make me feel relaxed and the and the. People, the ring tree can make me feel calm down and relax my eyes.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer the rural area because the rural area or many green tea, green cheese, uh, the green can make me feel calm down and relax and really comfortable and the air is very fresh.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I liked you in other country because I can travel abroad and the different country have different style and the special special culture. So I like the same view in different country.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、简洁并修正语法错误。可以先给出主题句,然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持。注意单复数、冠词以及重复填词(如“the, the”)的问题,避免冗余的短语如“and so on”。可以用连接词(because, so, therefore)让句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I especially like capturing blue skies and sunsets because their colors help me relax and lift my mood. For example, I often take sunset photos by the river to unwind after a busy day.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 内容需要更准确和连贯,纠正词汇使用错误(如“green tea/green cheese”应为“green trees/green fields”),并控制句子长度。先回答偏好,然后用一两个清晰的原因支持,使用连接词如“because”或“because of”。避免重复表达“calm down”和“relax”。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they have more green fields and trees. The peaceful scenery and fresh air help me relax, and I enjoy taking photos of quiet country lanes and wide-open landscapes.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 需修正时态和语法(如用现在时“I prefer”而非“liked you”),并提高表达准确性。先直接回答,然后说明具体原因并给例子。避免重复词如“special special”,并把“same view”改为更明确的表述(e.g. similar scenery with different cultural elements)。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see different styles and cultures. For instance, coastal towns in Spain look very different from those in my country, so I enjoy photographing how the same landscape can feel unique in another culture.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I like taking picture of different views such as the blue sky and the green tree and the sunset and so on.

I like taking pictures of different views such as the blue sky, green trees, the sunset, and so on.

原句中 picture 应为复数 pictures,因为表示泛指的“不同的景色”是多个对象;并且列举项之间需要适当的逗号分隔,green tree 更自然地用复数 green trees。建议记住:当谈论一般性的多个可数名词时使用复数形式。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, because the, the blue sky can make me feel relaxed and the and the. People, the ring tree can make me feel calm down and relax my eyes.

Because the blue sky makes me feel relaxed, and the tall trees make me feel calm and relax my eyes.

原句存在代词和表达混乱(the and the. People, the ring tree)且搭配不当。将 make 改为 makes(主语 the blue sky 为单数),tall trees 用复数并去掉多余词,表达更清晰。建议注意主语与谓语一致,并避免多余或错误的代词。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer the rural area because the rural area or many green tea, green cheese, uh, the green can make me feel calm down and relax and really comfortable and the air is very fresh.

I prefer rural areas because there are many green trees and plants; the greenery helps me feel calm, relaxed, and comfortable, and the air is very fresh.

原句中 area 应使用复数或复合表达 rural areas 或者 remove the;many green tea/green cheese 是错误词汇,应为 many green trees 或 plants;还需要使用 there are 来引出复数名词。建议用复数形式描述一般性的地区,并用正确的名词(trees, plants)。

There be issue

× I prefer the rural area because the rural area or many green tea, green cheese, uh, the green can make me feel calm down and relax and really comfortable and the air is very fresh.

I prefer rural areas because there are many green trees and plants; the greenery makes me feel calm and relaxed, and the air is very fresh.

原句缺少正确的 there be 结构来引出“有很多……”(原文写成 or many),应使用 there are many ... 来表达存在。建议在描述存在时使用 there is/there are。

Past tense issue

× I liked you in other country because I can travel abroad and the different country have different style and the special special culture.

I like other countries because I can travel abroad, and different countries have different styles and special cultures.

原句将现在偏好的陈述错误地用了过去式 liked,应使用一般现在时 like 来表达长期或习惯性偏好;另外 country 应使用复数 countries,have 与复数主语保持一致(have 而不是 has)。建议在表达现在的偏好时使用一般现在时,并注意主谓一致与名词复数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So I like the same view in different country.

So I like seeing similar views in different countries.

原句中 the same view in different country 结构不自然,country 应为复数 countries,且应使用 seeing similar views 表达在不同国家看到类似的景色。建议使用复数并用动名词短语使表达更自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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