Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating phrases like "I love" and correct minor grammar errors (e.g. "different kinds of views", "a four-month diploma").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing a variety of views because I trained professionally — I completed a four-month diploma in DSLR photography — and it helps me capture light and composition more effectively.

Gợi ý: Be direct and accurate: give a clear preference, explain why with specific details, and use correct vocabulary (e.g. "landscapes" and avoid redundant phrases like "urban cities"). Use a linking word to connect reason.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because the landscapes are more varied and tranquil, and I can photograph natural light and wide scenes more easily. For example, I like shooting at dawn in the countryside to capture mist over fields.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, balanced answer with one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid vague phrases and grammar mistakes (e.g. "other countries", "every country has its own scenery"). Use a linking word like "because" or "however" to show contrast.

Ví dụ: I enjoy photographing both local and foreign views because each place offers unique scenes; for instance, I can capture familiar cultural details at home, whereas traveling abroad lets me photograph different architecture and landscapes I haven't seen before.

× Definitely I love to take pictures of different kind of views because I'm quite good in taking pictures and I did a four month diploma of taking professional pictures with my DSLR and I love to do so.

✓ Definitely I love to take pictures of different kinds of views because I'm quite good at taking pictures and I completed a four-month diploma in professional photography with my DSLR and I love doing so.

Errors include 'different kind of views' (use plural 'kinds' for countable variety), 'good in taking pictures' (correct preposition is 'good at'), 'I did a four month diploma of taking professional pictures' (awkward; use 'completed a four-month diploma in professional photography'), and 'I love to do so' is acceptable but 'I love doing so' is more natural. Suggestions: use correct plural forms for quantifiers, use correct prepositions with 'good', hyphenate compound modifiers (four-month), and prefer 'in' for fields of study.

× As per my knowledge, rural areas are more landscapic and cityscapes, so I would love to collect and capture moments in the rural areas rather than in the urban cities.

✓ As far as I know, rural areas have more landscapes and cityscapes, so I would prefer to collect and capture moments in rural areas rather than in urban cities.

Problems: 'As per my knowledge' is non-idiomatic; use 'As far as I know'. 'more landscapic and cityscapes' mixes adjective with noun and uses 'more' incorrectly; use 'have more landscapes and cityscapes' or 'are more scenic'. 'the rural areas' and 'the urban cities' unnecessary definite articles; use general nouns 'rural areas' and 'urban cities'. Suggestions: use idiomatic expressions, match noun/adjective forms, and avoid unnecessary articles.

× So it depends on the situation. I would love to take pictures of the views in my country as well as in another countries.

✓ So it depends on the situation. I would love to take pictures of the views in my country as well as in other countries.

Error: 'another countries' is incorrect because 'another' is singular; use 'other countries' for plural. Suggestion: choose 'another' with singular countable nouns and 'other' with plurals.

× Also because every country has their own view and has their own landscaping sceneries.

✓ Also, because every country has its own views and its own landscaped scenery.

Errors: 'every country' is singular so the pronoun must be singular 'its' not 'their' (Incorrect use of pronouns / subject-pronoun agreement). 'view' should be plural 'views' or 'scenery'; 'landscaping sceneries' is incorrect collocation. Use 'landscaped scenery' or simply 'scenery'. Suggestions: match singular subjects with singular pronouns, use correct collocations (scenery is uncountable).

× So I would love to capture those moments if I ever get a chance.

✓ So I would love to capture those moments if I ever get the chance.

Minor issue: 'get a chance' is understandable but the more natural phrase is 'get the chance'. This is collocation preference rather than strict grammar. Suggestion: use common collocations 'get the chance' or 'have the chance'.