Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and provide one or two concise supporting details using linking words. For example, say why you enjoy it and give a brief example of when you take photos. Also correct verb forms (e.g., “I like to take photos”) and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. I like to take photos of different views because it helps me remember places and relax. For instance, I usually take pictures during my daily walks, especially of interesting buildings or colorful streets, so I can look back at them later.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then add a clear reason with linking words. Reduce repetition and use precise vocabulary (e.g., ‘city lights’, ‘vibrant atmosphere’). Correct small word choice errors (e.g., ‘I prefer urban areas’).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the city lights and the vibrant atmosphere. For example, walking along a lit street at night makes me feel relaxed and excited, especially when there are cafes and shops open.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitations and vague phrases. Start with a clear preference, then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use correct country/place names and clearer descriptions (e.g., ‘natural scenery’, ‘historic buildings’). Keep it concise and coherent with linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I find the landscapes and architecture more varied than in my hometown. For example, when I visited parts of Europe and West Africa, I was impressed by the historic buildings and beautiful natural scenery, which I don't often see at home.

× Yes, uh, typically I like take a photo in my, in my routine and, but eventually my, my photograph is not very, uh, good, but I always do that.

✓ Yes, uh, typically I like taking photos as part of my routine, but my photographs are not very good; I still always take them.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'taking' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). Also 'photo' should be plural when speaking generally ('photos') (ID 1 Singular and plural issue) and 'my photograph is' needs plural 'my photographs are' for agreement (ID 27 Subject-verb agreement). Suggestions: use 'like taking photos' and keep number agreement between subject and verb.

× I prefer urban view because I like lights in the city and when I was looking at the lights of the city my my heart, my feeling is really good and comfortable. So I prefer in Irvine areas.

✓ I prefer urban views because I like the city lights, and when I look at them my heart feels very good and comfortable. So I prefer areas like Irvine.

Use plural 'views' for general preference (ID 1). 'I like lights in the city' should be 'I like the city lights'—'the' specifies those lights (ID 17 Article errors) and 'in' is unnecessary. The tense 'when I was looking' should be simple present 'when I look' to match habitual action (ID 6 Present tense issue). 'My my heart, my feeling is' is awkward; 'my heart feels' is natural (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and ID 26 Sentence structure errors). 'I prefer in Irvine areas' is incorrect preposition and word order; use 'areas like Irvine' or 'I prefer Irvine areas' (ID 11 Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: use simple present for habits, correct articles, plural forms, and natural word order.

× Umm, that's not, not a good answer, but I prefer, uh, foreign country because, uh, my hometown is not very beautiful and when I was Soda Europe or Cote d'Ivoire or something like African countries, umm, there are so good nature and buildings. Yeah, that kind of things.

✓ Umm, that's not a good answer, but I prefer foreign countries because my hometown is not very beautiful; when I visited places in Europe, Cote d'Ivoire, or some African countries, there was such beautiful nature and buildings. Those are the kinds of places I like.

Several issues: 'foreign country' should be plural 'foreign countries' when speaking generally (ID 1). 'When I was Soda Europe or Cote d'Ivoire' is ungrammatical—use 'when I visited places in Europe, Cote d'Ivoire, or some African countries' (ID 26 Sentence structure errors and ID 5 Past tense issue for 'visited'). 'There are so good nature and buildings' should be 'there was such beautiful nature and buildings' or 'there were such beautiful natural scenery and buildings' to match countability and adjective use (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs and ID 19 Incorrect comparison object). 'Yeah, that kind of things' should be 'Those are the kinds of places' or 'That's the kind of thing' with correct number agreement (ID 1 Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: use 'visited' for past experiences, use plural nouns when generalizing, and rephrase awkward fragments into complete sentences.