Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns (e.g., 'a picture' → 'pictures', 'different views'). Avoid redundancy like 'different' twice and tighten phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, photographing from various angles can reveal unique perspectives and details that aren’t obvious at first, so I often try low or high angles to capture something unexpected.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference or a balanced opinion, use correct grammar and linking words to compare (e.g., 'On the one hand... On the other hand...'). Be specific about what you like in each setting and avoid vague words like 'sustainable' in this context.

Ví dụ: It depends on what I want to capture. On the one hand, urban scenes are colorful and lively, with bright lights and busy streets; on the other hand, rural views offer calm, green landscapes and interesting natural details, so I choose based on the mood I want to convey.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you prefer domestic or foreign views, then support with specific reasons and examples. Fix grammar (e.g., 'Thailand also offers', 'different kinds of views', remove repetition). Use linking words like 'for example' correctly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I don’t mind either, but I especially enjoy scenery in Thailand because it offers varied landscapes. For example, cities have vibrant street life and colorful lights, while nearby countryside provides lush rice fields and quiet rivers, so I can photograph very different scenes without traveling far.

× Yes I do. I think if I can take a pictures from different view it show me the different opinion and it also reflect some of unique views that you haven't ever seen before.

✓ Yes, I do. I think if I can take pictures from different views, they show me different perspectives, and they also reflect some unique views that you have never seen before.

Errors: 'a pictures' uses incorrect article with plural (article errors) and should be 'pictures'; 'different view' needs plural 'views' to match 'pictures' (plural agreement/consistency); 'it show me' has subject-verb disagreement because subject is plural so use 'they show' (subject-verb agreement, related to article/plural issue); 'it also reflect' same issue — use 'they also reflect'; 'some of unique views' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'of' — use 'some unique views' or just 'unique views'; 'haven't ever seen before' is awkward negative with 'ever' — use 'have never seen before'. Suggestions: remove incorrect article, make nouns and verbs agree in number, use plural consistently, fix word order, and use 'have never' for simple present perfect negative.

× Is depends on what you thinking.

✓ It depends on what you are thinking.

Error: The sentence lacks the subject pronoun 'It' and uses incorrect verb form 'thinking' without auxiliary. Use 'It depends' for the impersonal subject, and 'what you are thinking' (present continuous) to express current thought. Suggestion: always include the subject and correct auxiliary verbs for continuous tenses.

× If the views at the city it will be more colorful and vivid.

✓ If the views are in the city, they are usually more colorful and vivid.

Errors: 'at the city' is incorrect preposition choice and 'it will be' creates awkward tense/subject mismatch. Use 'in the city' (preposition), and because this is a general statement use present simple 'are' or 'are usually' rather than future 'will be'. Also match plural subject 'views' with plural pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and present simple for general truths.

× But if you take a photo of in rural areas the view it might be more green or more sustainable that could.

✓ But if you take a photo in rural areas, the scenery might be greener or more natural.

Errors: 'take a photo of in rural areas' has extra 'of' — use 'take a photo in rural areas' or 'take a photo of rural areas'; 'the view it might be' has redundant 'it' and pronoun mismatch; 'more green' should be comparative 'greener'; 'more sustainable that could' is ungrammatical and vague — 'more natural' is clearer. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and pronouns, use correct comparative adjective forms, and choose appropriate descriptive words.

× I think in Thailand also offer a very wonderful scenery.

✓ I think Thailand also offers very wonderful scenery.

Errors: Unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'Thailand' when subject is Thailand — use 'Thailand offers...'; missing third-person singular verb agreement: 'offer' should be 'offers' because 'Thailand' is singular; 'a very wonderful scenery' is incorrect article use with uncountable noun 'scenery' — drop 'a'. Suggestion: use the country as subject with singular verb and treat 'scenery' as uncountable.

× You can see different kind of views from different perspective.

✓ You can see different kinds of views from different perspectives.

Errors: 'different kind of views' should be 'different kinds of views' (plural 'kinds' to agree with 'views'); 'different perspective' should be plural because multiple views/perspectives are implied. Suggestion: match singular/plural of 'kind/kinds' and 'perspective/perspectives' to the noun they modify.

× For example, if you live in the city, you can see a lot of colorful light and people at people nearby.

✓ For example, if you live in the city, you can see a lot of colorful lights and people nearby.

Errors: 'colorful light' should be plural 'colorful lights' to match 'a lot of'; 'people at people nearby' is redundant and ungrammatical — remove 'at people' and keep 'people nearby'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to multiple items and avoid redundant phrases.