Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct verb forms and more specific supporting details. Use one or two linking words (for example, "because" or "so") and limit to 2–4 sentences. Correct errors like "makes me to capture" → "helps me capture" and "use to see" → "often look at."

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me capture special moments and the character of a place. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and street scenes and later look at them to remember how I felt at that time.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, avoid filler words and repetition, and use correct grammar (e.g., "there are lots of interesting buildings" not "buildings has been placed"). Add a specific example and a linking phrase like "because" or "for example." Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities have a lot of interesting architecture and diverse streetscapes. For example, I enjoy photographing old colonial buildings and modern skyscrapers, which provide varied subjects and details.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and organize ideas: start with a topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons and examples using linking words such as "because," "for example," or "also." Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., "lots of cultural diversity," "northern areas," "historical sites in Lahore"). Limit to 2–4 sentences and avoid hesitations.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it has a lot of cultural diversity and historic sites. For example, I enjoy photographing the northern landscapes and the historic monuments in Lahore, which offer both natural beauty and rich architecture.

× I, I am very fond of taking pictures and because taking pictures makes me to capture the certain identity as well as the certain moments in in the form of pictures.

✓ I am very fond of taking pictures because taking pictures allows me to capture certain identities as well as particular moments in the form of photographs.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'makes me to capture' which is ungrammatical. After expressions like 'make' (causative) we use the base verb without 'to' (make someone do) or use 'allows'/'helps' + to-infinitive. Also 'the certain' is redundant; use 'certain' or 'particular'. Replace 'pictures' with 'photographs' for variety. Remove duplicate words and filler 'I,'.

× And I use to see the pictures to memorize that particular the particular movement.

✓ And I used to look at the pictures to remember that particular moment.

The phrase 'use to' is incorrect for past habitual action; it should be 'used to'. 'See' is less natural than 'look at' when referring to viewing pictures. 'Memorize' is possible but 'remember' is more natural in this context. 'Movement' likely intended as 'moment'. Remove duplicate phrase 'the particular the particular'.

× Yeah, I, yeah, I would like to to view to see the views of urban areas because in urban areas there are lots of architecture, lots of architecture and as well as buildings has been placed over there so we can click lots of pictures.

✓ I would like to see views in urban areas because there is a lot of architecture and many buildings, so we can take many pictures.

Errors include duplicate words and awkward phrasing. 'Would like to to view to see' has repeated infinitives; simplify to 'would like to see'. 'Lots of architecture' is uncountable, use 'a lot of architecture' or 'many architectural features'. 'Buildings has been placed' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and passive use; use 'many buildings' (active). 'Click pictures' is nonstandard; 'take pictures' is correct.

× In all over the world, even in our city or in our town, lots of signally found there.

✓ All over the world, even in our city or town, many signs are found there.

'In all over the world' should be 'all over the world' without 'in'. 'Lots of signally found there' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'many signs are found there' using passive voice correctly. Also 'our city or in our town' is repetitive; 'city or town' suffices.

× But I I currently prefer my country because my country has a lots of culture diversity.

✓ But I currently prefer my country because it has a lot of cultural diversity.

Repeating 'I I' is a disfluency. 'My country has a lots of culture diversity' contains article and noun form errors: use 'a lot of' not 'a lots of', and 'cultural diversity' instead of 'culture diversity'. Replace repeated noun 'my country' with pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition.

× And if if we go to the north areas, so I would like to go north areas to click picture over there.

✓ If we go to the northern areas, I would like to go there to take pictures.

Remove duplicate 'if if' and avoid combining 'if' with 'so'. Use adjective 'northern' for areas. 'Go north areas' is ungrammatical; use 'go to the northern areas' or 'go there'. 'Click picture' should be 'take pictures' and 'over there' is redundant when 'there' suffices.

× And if we're going to Lahore, they are very historical places so that.

✓ If we go to Lahore, there are very historical places there.

The original mixes pronouns and tense. 'We're going to Lahore' is fine conversationally, but 'they are very historical places so that' is unclear. Use 'there are many historical places in Lahore' for clarity. Alternatively: 'If we go to Lahore, we can visit many historical places.'