Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Well, I like taking pictures of different waves for an examples, a photo of a sunset, a photo of a sky, a photo of a rainbow. Like that. I like to take different types of photos which makes me feel good and which makes me happy, rather than taking the same.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Uh, well, I like to take photos in a rural area because most of the time in a rural area, they are, they are, we can see there are so many beautiful places to take a photo. For example, waterfalls, mountains, uh, rocks are there.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Will I like to uh, click on my own countries photos? Uh, because my country is a very nice country and it has so many beautiful places. For example, like when we go to our area candy, it has so many special places and good places to click photos.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and limit to 3–4 sentences. Also correct vocabulary (e.g., “views” or “scenes” instead of “waves”) and article use (a photo of the sky).
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and rainbows because their colours are striking and change quickly. Also, I like capturing wide landscapes such as beaches or mountains because they make me feel happy and relaxed.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: Answer directly, reduce hesitations, and use clear linking language to add details. Use accurate grammar (plural/singular agreement) and more specific descriptors (e.g., “scenic waterfalls,” “rolling hills”). Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid filler words like “uh.”
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they offer more natural scenery. For instance, I can photograph waterfalls, rolling hills and rocky cliffs, which provide interesting textures and colours. These landscapes also change with the seasons, giving me fresh subjects to capture.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and avoid asking back the question. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary (e.g., “take photos of my own country”). Provide one or two precise examples and a reason. Remove fillers and correct place names if needed.
Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best locations and local seasons. For example, when I visit my region, there are historic villages and coastal cliffs that produce dramatic photos. Also, being local helps me plan shoots at the best time of day.