Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장 구성이 전반적으로 자연스럽고 의미 전달이 잘 되지만 몇 가지 개선할 점이 있습니다. 첫째, 표현의 정확성을 위해 'city scrapes'는 'cityscapes'로 고쳐야 합니다. 둘째, 문장이 다소 길어 연결어와 쉼표 사용을 조절하면 더 명확해집니다. 셋째, supporting detail을 하나 또는 두 개의 구체적 예로 간결히 정리하면 효과적입니다. 마지막으로 문장 수를 3~4문장 내로 유지하고 linking words (for example, because, so)를 적절히 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because photos help me remember both the experiences and the emotions. For example, when I travel I often take pictures of cityscapes and small details such as café interiors or street signs. This way I can look back and vividly relive those moments.

Gợi ý: 문장 연결과 문법 오류를 고쳐야 합니다. 현재 답변에는 문장 사이에 마침표가 빠지고 문장이 끝나지 않아 불완전합니다. 또한 이유 제시가 반복적이므로 간결하게 정리하세요. linking words(though, but, because)로 대조와 이유를 명확히 하고 마지막에 구체적 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas now. Although I used to like the peaceful countryside because of its natural scenery, I now enjoy city views because of the vibrant skyline and colourful lights. For example, I love photographing the city at night when the buildings are illuminated.

Gợi ý: 답변이 모호하고 비구체적입니다. ‘They have their own’라는 표현은 불완전하며, 구체적으로 어떤 장점이 있는지 설명해야 합니다. 비교 표현을 사용해 두 가지를 대비시키고 각각의 구체적 장점을 한 문장씩 제시하세요. 문장은 2~3문장으로 간결하게 구성하세요.

Ví dụ: I actually like both. Views in my own country are familiar and nostalgic, which makes them comforting, whereas views in other countries are exciting because they offer new cultures and architecture to discover.

× I like taking pictures of different scenes because they help me remember the experiences and the emotions.

✓ I like taking pictures of different scenes because they help me remember the experiences and emotions.

The phrase 'the emotions' is not wrong but is redundant with 'the experiences' here; this is a style/conciseness issue rather than a strict grammar error. Remove the extra article to make the sentence more natural: 'the experiences and emotions.' Keep tense and structure as present simple because this is a habitual fact. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I felt that, for example, when I travel, I often photograph city scrapes and small details like cafe interiors or street signs so I can look back and vividly relieve those moments.

✓ I feel that, for example, when I travel, I often photograph cityscapes and small details like cafe interiors or street signs so I can look back and vividly relive those moments.

Mixed tense: 'I felt' (past) conflicts with 'when I travel' (present habitual). Use present 'I feel' to match habitual action. 'Relieve' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'relive' (to experience again). 'City scrapes' is a spelling error; the correct term is 'cityscapes.' These are lexical and verb form errors fixed to match present tense habitual meaning. Grammar problem type ID:9

× I prefer views in urban areas I used to prefer views of the countryside because the scenery was peaceful and full of nature, but now I prefer city views because I enjoy the vibrant skyline, the lights and.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas. I used to prefer views of the countryside because the scenery was peaceful and full of nature, but now I prefer city views because I enjoy the vibrant skyline and the lights.

Run-on sentence: two independent clauses were joined without punctuation; add a period after 'urban areas.' Also the phrase ended with 'and.' which is incomplete; include the noun 'the lights' and remove the trailing comma. Maintain past tense 'used to prefer' for past habit and present 'prefer' for current preference. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually I like them both. I think they have their own. What can I say? They both have advantages.

✓ Actually, I like both. I think each has its own advantages. What can I say? They both have advantages.

'I like them both' is acceptable, but 'I like both' is more natural. 'I think they have their own' is incomplete and unclear; replace with 'I think each has its own advantages' to specify what 'their own' refers to. Maintain consistency and clarity. Add comma after 'Actually' for natural speech pacing. Grammar problem type ID:12