Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and use correct tense and grammar. Provide one brief supporting detail (why or what you like to photograph) linked by a simple connector. Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of scenes that catch my eye. For example, I often photograph sunsets and interesting buildings because they have striking colours and shapes.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then contrast with specific details using linking words (for example, 'whereas' or 'while'). Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views. Urban scenes interest me because of modern architecture and lively streets, whereas rural areas appeal to me for their green fields and traditional farms.

Gợi ý: Be clearer and use correct tense and word order. Start with a concise topic sentence ('It depends') then explain with two specific, linked reasons (time constraints, interesting locations). Avoid hesitations and repeated words. Use past/present consistently.

Ví dụ: It depends on the circumstances. When I'm in my home country, India, I have more time to visit regional places and take many photos, whereas when I'm travelling in Canada I am often busy and take fewer pictures.

× Yes, I like to take pictures whenever I see a beautiful uh, things around me.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures whenever I see beautiful things around me.

The phrase 'a beautiful things' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'things' causing an article error (ID 22). Remove 'a' and 'uh,' and use 'beautiful things' to match plural noun. Also omit filler 'uh' in formal speech.

× I love to to take pictures.

✓ I love to take pictures.

Duplicate 'to' is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Remove the extra 'to' so the infinitive 'to take' is correct.

× So whenever I see any attractive places I want, I took a picture.

✓ So whenever I see any attractive places I want, I take a picture.

The original mixes present reference 'whenever I see' with past 'I took', causing tense inconsistency (ID 5). Use simple present 'I take' to match habitual action. Also retain 'places I want' is awkward but not listed; main correction is tense.

× Yes, I would like to capture views on both places.

✓ Yes, I would like to capture views in both places.

Using 'on' with 'places' is incorrect preposition choice (ID 11). Use 'in both places' to indicate locations.

× If I talk about the urban areas, I would like to capture a building views and if I talk about the rural areas, I would like to take pictures of the greenery and the various types of farms and the places built in the rural areas.

✓ If I talk about urban areas, I would like to capture building views, and if I talk about rural areas, I would like to take pictures of the greenery, various types of farms, and places in the countryside.

Multiple article and noun number errors (ID 22). 'the urban areas' can be 'urban areas' or 'the urban areas' but 'a building views' is wrong: 'building views' or 'a building's view'. Also 'the places built in the rural areas' is awkward; 'places in the countryside' is clearer. Commas improve clarity.

× It depends upon the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Depends upon' is not strictly wrong but 'depends on' is the more natural preposition choice (ID 11) in spoken and written English.

× Sometimes I as in in India, in my home country, I would like to go to the regional places.

✓ Sometimes, in India, my home country, I like to go to regional places.

The original contains extra fillers 'I as in in' and awkward word order (ID 26). Remove repetitions and use simple present 'I like' for habitual action. Place commas for clarity.

× At that time I took a lot of photos.

✓ At that time I took a lot of photos.

This sentence is correct if referring to a specific past time, so no grammatical change is needed. Included here to acknowledge tense is appropriate (ID 5).

× But in in Canada I took I have a less time, so I do not take pictures.

✓ But in Canada I have less time, so I do not take pictures.

The original mixes past and present and repeats words 'in in' and 'I took I have' causing tense errors and redundancy (ID 6). Use present 'I have less time' to explain a current or habitual situation and remove repeated words.