Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần nói trực tiếp, súc tích và ngắt câu hợp lý; tránh từ thừa và sửa ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: thay “different view” bằng “different views”; loại bỏ “uh” và sửa thứ tự từ (“places I have visited”); giới hạn câu không quá 2–3 mệnh đề, thêm một cụm chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh bạn thích chụp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take photos of landscapes and cityscapes whenever I visit new places, especially during sunrise or sunset when the light is best.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và hoàn chỉnh. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: “colored lights on the road” hoặc “the colors of the sky”), dùng liên từ để nối ý và nêu lý do cụ thể. Tránh câu bị bỏ dở; mô tả cụ thể điều bạn thích (không khí, âm thanh, ánh sáng) và giữ tối đa 3-4 câu ngắn.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the countryside feels calm and fresh. In the evenings the sky shows beautiful colors and the quiet roads and fresh air create a peaceful atmosphere that I find relaxing.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và dùng danh từ đúng dạng số nhiều/số ít (landscapes, islands, museums). Trình bày lý do rõ ràng và cụm ví dụ cụ thể, dùng liên từ để làm mạch văn trôi chảy. Nên thêm một so sánh ngắn với việc đi nước ngoài để làm rõ quan điểm.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful landscapes, islands and historical museums. These attractions draw visitors and make it easy for me to explore familiar places rather than travelling abroad.

× Yes, of course I am keen on taking pictures of different view in different place where I was uh, visited.

✓ Yes, of course I am keen on taking pictures of different views in different places that I have visited.

The nouns 'view' and 'place' need plural forms when speaking generally, so use 'views' and 'places' (Singular and plural issue). The clause 'where I was uh, visited' mixes active and passive and incorrect tense; use a relative clause with present perfect 'that I have visited' to show past visits with present relevance. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× I always take some pictures about this place.

✓ I always take some pictures of these places.

Use the preposition 'of' with 'pictures' to indicate what is shown in the photos; 'about' is incorrect here. Also use plural 'places' to match the idea of multiple locations and 'these' to refer back to previously mentioned places.

× I prefer views in rural areas because in the evening I can see some colors light in the road.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because in the evening I can see colorful lights on the road.

'Colors light' is incorrect word order and choice; use the adjective 'colorful' before 'lights'. The preposition for location is 'on the road', not 'in the road'. This fixes adjective/adverb placement and preposition choice.

× On the road, for example, the peaceful atmospheres and fresh air make the scenery much.

✓ On the road, for example, the peaceful atmosphere and fresh air make the scenery much more pleasant.

Use singular 'atmosphere' for a general environment; 'peaceful' modifies 'atmosphere'. 'Make the scenery much' is incomplete—add 'more pleasant' to complete the comparison. This addresses incorrect use of nouns/adjectives and sentence structure.

× Actually I prefer views in my country because my country has many landscape, island or historical museum, so it's attracted many people to travel, relax and visit it.

✓ Actually I prefer views in my country because my country has many landscapes, islands, and historical museums, so it attracts many people to travel, relax, and visit them.

List items should be plural: 'landscapes, islands, and historical museums'. 'It's attracted' is wrong tense and voice here; use simple present 'it attracts' or better 'they attract' to refer to the places. Pronoun should match plural 'them' to refer to the attractions. This corrects adjective/noun number, verb tense, and pronoun use.