Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like “uh” and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., “to and” → “and”).

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy photographing different landscapes. For example, I often take photos of sunsets and city skylines, and then I upload the best shots to social media to share my experience with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then support it with clear, specific details and linking words. Fix vocabulary errors (e.g., “potash” is incorrect here) and avoid sentence fragments. Aim for 2–3 short sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of the city. For instance, I like photographing busy streets, people walking, and the contrast of old buildings with modern architecture.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain with specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Remove fillers and correct verb forms (e.g., “I'm always go to” → “I always go to” or “I often go”). Mention concrete examples of places or features.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful rural landscapes. For example, I often visit nearby villages and lakes to photograph traditional houses and rolling hills, which feel familiar and meaningful to me.

× I love taking pictures of different sceneries.

✓ I love taking pictures of different scenes.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun, so the plural 'sceneries' is incorrect in this context. Use 'scenery' (uncountable) or the countable noun 'scenes'. Suggestion: say 'different scenery' or 'different scenes' depending on meaning.

× I really love to, uh, upload them to social media to and share with friends about the experience.

✓ I really love to upload them to social media and share the experience with friends.

The phrase contains redundant and misplaced particles: 'to and share' is incorrect. Also 'share with friends about the experience' is awkward. Correct by using a single infinitive phrase 'to upload' and then the coordinate verb 'and share', and place 'with friends' directly after 'share'.

× The views in urban areas, looking at the cars wandering around and.

✓ I like the views in urban areas, watching cars moving around.

The original is a sentence fragment with an incomplete clause and an extraneous conjunction 'and.' It lacks a main verb. Rephrase to provide a complete clause: 'I like the views in urban areas' and use a participle phrase 'watching cars moving around.'

× The potash and the people walking around.

✓ the parks and the people walking around.

'Potash' is the wrong word here (it refers to potassium compounds). Likely intended 'parks.' This is a word choice error; replace with the correct noun 'parks.' Also combine with the previous sentence for clarity.

× I prefer the views in my own country. As there are lots of uh rural views in my countries, I'm always go to uh take photos in.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country. Since there are lots of rural views in my country, I always go to take photos there.

Errors include plural 'countries' when 'country' was intended, incorrect use of 'As' at sentence start (better 'Since' but not mandatory), and wrong verb form 'I'm always go' which mixes present continuous with base verb. Correct subject-verb agreement by using 'country' and the habitual present 'I always go.' Place 'there' to indicate location. Suggestion: 'Since there are lots of rural views in my country, I always go there to take photos.'