Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: แก้ไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจน: ใช้โครงประโยคที่ถูกต้อง (I like taking pictures) และเลี่ยงคำซ้ำหรือคำผิด เช่น ‘I'm like to taking’ ควรเป็น ‘I like to take’ หรือ ‘I enjoy taking’. เพิ่มรายละเอียดสนับสนุนสั้นๆ ด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น because หรือ so เพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติ

Ví dụ: Yes, I like taking pictures, especially of the Flynn wheel, because it has striking lights and a great view at night.

Gợi ý: ตอบตรงคำถามและอย่าพูดว่าไม่เข้าใจโดยไม่พยายามตอบ แปลความหมายง่ายๆ ก่อนถ้าจำเป็น (urban = เมือง, rural = ชนบท) แล้วเลือกฝ่ายหนึ่งพร้อมเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้ linking word เช่น ‘because’ หรือ ‘because of’ เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy quiet landscapes and fresh air, which help me relax.

Gợi ý: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคและคำศัพท์: ใช้ ‘I prefer views in my own country’ หรือ ‘I prefer local views’ และหลีกเลี่ยงคำผิด (‘I'm prefer real’ ควรเป็น ‘I prefer’). เพิ่มรายละเอียดหรือเหตุผลเล็กน้อยโดยใช้ linking words เช่น ‘because’ และอธิบายสั้นๆ เช่น cultural familiarity หรือ travel costs

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the culture and it's cheaper to travel domestically.

× Yes, I'm like to taking a picture of the Flynn wheel because it's beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of the Ferris wheel because it's beautiful.

Use 'like' (not 'I'm like') and after 'like' use the -ing form 'taking'. Also 'take a picture of the Flynn wheel' should be plural 'taking pictures' for general preference and 'Flynn wheel' likely intended 'Ferris wheel'. Use correct noun form and word order. Suggestion: Say 'I like taking pictures of the Ferris wheel.'

× Do you prefer will in opera area or rural area? I cannot answer because I don't know what it's mean in Thailand.

✓ Do you prefer urban areas or rural areas? I cannot answer because I don't know what that means in Thailand.

The student used 'Do you prefer will' incorrectly (remove 'will') and 'opera' should be 'urban'. Also 'what it's mean' is ungrammatical; use 'what that means' or 'what it means'. Ensure subject-verb agreement in indirect question. Suggestion: Say 'Do you prefer urban areas or rural areas? I cannot answer because I don't know what that means in Thailand.'

× Do you prefer will in your own country or another countries? Yes, I'm prefer real in my own country because I don't have money to travel to another country.

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Yes, I prefer really to stay in my own country because I don't have money to travel to another country.

Remove 'will' after 'prefer'. Use 'prefer' (not 'I'm prefer'). 'another countries' should be 'other countries'. 'I'm prefer real' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'I prefer to stay in my own country' or 'I really prefer my own country'. Also ensure consistency: 'in other countries' and 'to travel to another country'. Suggestion: Say 'Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries? Yes, I prefer to stay in my own country because I don't have money to travel abroad.'