Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Expand the answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Use a complete sentence and avoid short fragments. Add a linking phrase if you give reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, when I travel I photograph sunsets and busy streets so I can remember the atmosphere and share the moments with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence saying your preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Fix grammar (plural/singular) and avoid filler words like "uh". Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural and provincial views because they offer natural scenery and tranquility. For example, provinces have forests, parks and beaches, which contrast with the busy city. I have visited Boracay four times and I especially love its sunsets, which are calm and colorful.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement of preference (or say you like both for different reasons), then compare using linking words (e.g., "while", "however"). Correct comparative grammar ("better", "more modern") and provide one brief specific example for each side.

Ví dụ: I like both, but for different reasons: I prefer city views in other countries while I prefer natural scenery in my own country. For instance, Japan and Hong Kong have more modern skylines with impressive architecture, while the Philippines offers beautiful beaches and mountain landscapes, such as the beaches in Boracay.

× Yes, to capture memories in every angle.

✓ Yes, to capture memories from every angle.

The original uses 'in every angle,' which is an incorrect preposition for this expression. Use 'from every angle' to indicate different perspectives. This is a preposition/phrase usage issue; replace 'in' with 'from' for natural English. Suggestion: say 'from every angle' when describing different viewpoints.

× Since I live in a city, I prefer views in provinces.

✓ Since I live in a city, I prefer views in the provinces.

The noun 'provinces' here is a plural count noun that typically requires a determiner. Use the definite article 'the' when referring to provinces in general contrast to the city. Also 'in the provinces' is the natural prepositional phrase. Suggestion: include 'the' before plural geographical term when speaking generally about that category.

× Uh, provinces has a lot to offer such as forest, parks and beautiful beaches.

✓ Uh, provinces have a lot to offer such as forests, parks, and beautiful beaches.

'Provinces' is plural, so the verb must be plural: use 'have' not 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Also use plural forms 'forests' and include commas between items. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and pluralize countable nouns when listing examples.

× I have been to Boracay for four times already and it is the most beautiful sunset I have.

✓ I have been to Boracay four times already, and it has the most beautiful sunsets I have seen.

'Have been to ... for four times' is unidiomatic; use 'been ... four times'. 'It is the most beautiful sunset I have' is ungrammatical: 'it' (the place) 'has the most beautiful sunsets' and you need a past participle 'seen' to complete 'I have seen.' Also plural 'sunsets' fits multiple visits. Suggestion: say 'I have been to Boracay four times already' and 'it has the most beautiful sunsets I have seen.' Note: this corrects tense and verb form to match present perfect usage.

× when it comes to city views they are way more better because they are more advanced in modernization.

✓ when it comes to city views, they are much better because they are more advanced in modernization.

'More better' is incorrect: 'better' already expresses the comparative, so 'much better' or simply 'better' is correct. 'Way' colloquially can modify but should be used with 'much' or alone. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use 'much better' or 'better' instead of 'more better.' This addresses comparative error and adverb usage.

× But Philippines has been blessed with beautiful beaches and mountains so I prefer Philippines when it comes to nature.

✓ But the Philippines has been blessed with beautiful beaches and mountains, so I prefer the Philippines when it comes to nature.

Country names that are plural (the Philippines) require the definite article 'the.' Use 'the Philippines' consistently when referring to the country. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: always use 'the Philippines' when naming that country.