Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Répétitions et formulation : évitez de répéter des expressions similaires (« I love taking photos/I'd love to take photos ») et corrigez des erreurs lexicales (« Clearwater » semble inapproprié ici). Structure : commencez par une phrase claire répondant à la question, puis ajoutez deux détails précis au maximum. Connecteurs : utilisez un lien simple pour relier les idées (for example, also). Prononciation/fluency : travaillez la fluidité en éliminant hésitations et en variant le vocabulaire descriptif.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views when I travel. For example, on a camping trip in Switzerland I focused on pastoral scenes, like cows grazing against alpine meadows, which highlighted the peaceful landscape. I also enjoy urban photography; in New York I captured dramatic skyscrapers illuminated at dusk.

Gợi ý: Clarté et concision : évitez des formulations non naturelles comme « me personally » et limitez la réponse à 3–4 phrases. Structure : commencez par une opinion claire (I prefer…), puis justifiez avec deux raisons précises. Liens logiques : utilisez des connecteurs simples (because, however). Vocabulaire : remplacez « vibe » par des termes plus précis (energy, architecture, nightlife).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in the countryside and they make me feel calm and relaxed. For example, quiet fields and woodlands help me unwind after a busy week. However, I also appreciate urban views for their energy and striking architecture.

Gợi ý: Précision et registre : évitez les abréviations ou acronymes incorrects (« LED C ») et terminez vos phrases. Structure : commencez par une phrase directe (It depends…), puis donnez deux exemples contrastés (city vs coast) avec détails concrets. Cohérence : utilisez connecteurs (however, for example). Prononciation/vocabulaire : remplacez « a lot of » par des descriptions précises (sandy beaches, clear turquoise water).

Ví dụ: It depends on the location. For example, city areas in my country often have heavy pollution and unattractive views, so I prefer foreign cities for skyline photography. However, coastal regions at home are beautiful, with palm-lined beaches and clear, turquoise water, which I enjoy photographing.

× I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. Recently, my friends and I went on a camping trip to Switzerland and I'd love to take photos of the scenery, especially the cows and the Clearwater.

✓ I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. Recently, my friends and I went on a camping trip to Switzerland and I loved taking photos of the scenery, especially of the cows and the clear water.

Error type: incorrect use of present participle and noun form. The student used 'I'd love to take' (would love) which is present conditional and conflicts with the completed past action 'went on a camping trip'. Use past tense 'loved taking' to match the past event. Also 'the Clearwater' is incorrect as a common noun; use 'the clear water' or specify a place name. Suggestion: align verb tense with the time reference and use correct noun phrase 'clear water' or a proper noun if naming a location.

× Last year I went on a trip to New York with my family and I love to take photos of the skyscrapers.

✓ Last year I went on a trip to New York with my family and I loved taking photos of the skyscrapers.

Error type: tense inconsistency. The clause 'Last year I went' sets the context in the past, so the following action should also be in the past: 'I loved taking' rather than present 'I love to take'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when describing past events.

× Honestly it depends, me personally, I grew up living in the countryside which I think is considered a rural area and I prefer looking at the nature because it's what I'm used to.

✓ Honestly it depends. Personally, I grew up in the countryside, which I think is considered a rural area, and I prefer looking at nature because it's what I'm used to.

Error type: incorrect pronoun placement and unnecessary pronoun 'me personally'. Also 'the nature' is incorrect article use; use 'nature' without 'the'. Punctuation and clause separation improves clarity. Suggestion: remove redundant pronouns, use 'personally' and omit 'the' before 'nature'.

× It gives me an atmosphere of peace and calm.

✓ It gives me a feeling of peace and calm.

Error type: collocation and word choice. 'Gives me an atmosphere' is unnatural collocation; 'gives me a feeling' or 'creates an atmosphere' are correct. Suggestion: use 'gives me a feeling of' or 'creates an atmosphere of' depending on intended meaning.

× But I can understand why people would like living views in urban areas more because it just has a nice vibe to it.

✓ But I can understand why people would prefer views in urban areas more, because they just have a nice vibe.

Error type: word choice and agreement. 'Living views' is not natural; use 'views' or 'city views'. Also subject agreement: 'it just has a nice vibe' should refer to 'they' or 'the city' depending on noun. Suggestion: use 'prefer views in urban areas' and match pronoun number: 'they just have a nice vibe' or 'the city just has a nice vibe'.

× It depends where in my country, because my country is classified as an LED C, meaning that it is less developed than other countries.

✓ It depends where in my country, because my country is classified as an LDC, meaning that it is less developed than other countries.

Error type: incorrect acronym/word form. The common term is 'LDC' (least developed country) rather than 'LED C'. Suggestion: use correct acronym 'LDC' and optionally expand it for clarity.

× And so in the actual city, the views aren't that great.

✓ In the city itself, the views weren't that great.

Error type: tense inconsistency. The speaker is describing their country in general but referring to earlier past context about places; if referring to the situation generally present tense is okay, but given surrounding past references better to use past: 'weren't'. Suggestion: choose tense consistently; use present for general truths, past for specific past visits.

× But if you were to go to areas that are on the coast, it's really beautiful.

✓ But if you were to go to areas on the coast, they're really beautiful.

Error type: pronoun and agreement with 'areas'. Use 'they're' to agree with plural 'areas' rather than 'it's'. Also 'areas on the coast' is fine; keep preposition 'on'. Suggestion: ensure subject-pronoun agreement: plural noun -> plural pronoun.

× There's a lot of palm trees, the water is nice and clear, and there's a lot of.

✓ There are a lot of palm trees, the water is nice and clear, and there is a lot of wildlife.

Error type: sentence fragment and subject-verb agreement. 'There's a lot of palm trees' should be 'There are a lot of palm trees' (plural). The sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'there's a lot of.' Complete the thought (for example 'a lot of wildlife' or 'a lot to see'). Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns and finish fragments with a complete noun phrase.