Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and hesitations, correct grammar (use gerunds correctly and past tense), and organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so, and) and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photographs help me remember places I have visited. For example, when I travel to a new city I photograph the streets and buildings so I can recall the atmosphere later. This way, photos become a visual diary of my trips.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference in one clear sentence, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word (for example, because or whereas). Fix vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'villages' not 'beau', 'enjoy nature' not 'enjoy naturally'). Avoid vague phrases and unnecessary hesitation.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because villages offer peaceful natural scenery and a closer connection to traditional life. For instance, I enjoy watching farmers work in the fields, which feels relaxing and gives me insight into local culture, whereas urban scenes are busier and less restful.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement (prefer home or abroad), then explain with specific reasons and an example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'famous', 'historical places', 'I have visited') and use linking words (however, but, also) to make the answer coherent. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I love the views in my own country because it is famous for historical places and I have visited many of them. However, I also want to see views abroad, such as in Dubai and the United States, because I am curious about modern skylines and different landscapes.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because when I'm taking the pictures of different views, uh, like, uh, surrounding a new environment, it is a part of the memory because I can see in my future that I had visited there and it really can recover my memory that what I have done on that time.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because when I'm taking pictures of a new environment, it becomes part of my memory; I can look back in the future and remember that I visited there, and it helps me recall what I did at that time.

The phrase 'like to taking' is incorrect because after 'like' either the base form with to (to like to take) or the gerund (like taking) is used; here the gerund 'taking' is correct without 'to'. Also 'taking the pictures of different views' is wordy; use 'taking pictures of a new environment'. 'I had visited there' uses past perfect incorrectly when simple past or present perfect fits; 'I visited there' or 'I have visited' is better depending on context. 'Recover my memory' is unnatural; use 'recall' or 'remember'. 'What I have done on that time' mixes tense and preposition; correct to 'what I did at that time'. Suggestions: remove extra 'to', use gerund after 'like', simplify phrases, use consistent past/simple or present perfect tense for past events, and use 'recall' instead of 'recover' for memory.

× Well, I prefer scenery to beau at urban areas or at villages because a village is a better where we can enjoy naturally and we can see that, uh, our farmers, how they perform our field and urban areas, uh, tells us about our future.

✓ Well, I prefer scenic views in urban areas or villages because a village is a better place where we can enjoy nature and see how our farmers work in the fields; urban areas, on the other hand, tell us about our future.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'scenery to beau at' is incorrect; use 'scenic views in'. 'At villages' should be 'in villages'. 'Enjoy naturally' is wrong; use 'enjoy nature' or 'enjoy it naturally' depending on meaning. 'Perform our field' is incorrect; use 'work in the fields'. Also insert 'place' after 'better'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions 'in' for locations, choose correct nouns (place, nature, fields), and reorder phrases for clarity.

× Well ma'am I am living in that type of a country which is fami famous for this historical places and for past.

✓ Well, ma'am, I live in a country that is famous for its historical places and its past.

Errors: 'fami famous' is a typo; 'that type of a country' is wordy and unidiomatic — use 'a country that'. 'This historical places' mixes demonstrative and plural; use 'its historical places'. 'For past' needs an article/possessive — use 'its past'. Also use simple present 'I live' instead of 'I am living' for a general state. Suggestions: remove redundancy, fix typos, use possessive 'its' for country features, and use simple present for habitual or permanent states.

× So I had visited many of historical places and our country and I like it but in future I want to visit abroad like Dubai and US.

✓ So I have visited many historical places in our country and I like them, but in the future I want to visit abroad, like Dubai and the US.

'I had visited' (past perfect) is incorrect here because there is no reference point in the past; present perfect 'I have visited' is appropriate to express life experience. 'Many of historical places' is wrong; use 'many historical places'. 'I like it' should agree in number with 'places' -> 'I like them'. 'In future' needs the article 'the' -> 'in the future'. 'Visit abroad' usually is 'travel abroad' or 'visit places abroad'; include 'the' before 'US'. Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences, correct plural agreement, add articles where needed, and prefer 'travel abroad' or 'visit abroad' with objects.