Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Rút gọn câu trả lời để tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm (ví dụ "pic pictures"); dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Ví dụ: nêu loại cảnh bạn thích nhất (sunsets, mountains), tần suất chụp và mục đích chia sẻ. Lưu ý nối ý bằng từ liên kết như "because" hoặc "so" để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially landscapes like mountains and sunsets, because they look impressive in photos. I usually take photos whenever I travel and then share the best ones with my friends online.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Sử dụng câu ngắn, chính xác và sửa lỗi từ vựng/đại từ (ví dụ "is much more peaceful than the river" là sai). Nói rõ so sánh giữa đô thị và nông thôn, cung cấp 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: không khí, tiếng ồn, cảnh quan). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find mountains and rivers more peaceful than busy city streets. The air is fresher and there is less noise, so I feel much more relaxed in the countryside.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Tránh thông tin lộn xộn (không rõ nghĩa như "Alex Paul" hay "has nine place"). Trả lời trực tiếp: nêu sở thích chung (thích trong nước hay nước ngoài), giải thích lý do và kèm ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Kiểm tra ngữ pháp (it's depends → it depends).

Ví dụ: It depends on what I want at the time. I like views in my own country because they are familiar and often easier to visit, but I also enjoy seeing new landscapes abroad for different cultures and scenery.

× Yes, of course I like taking pic pictures of different views, especially beautiful landscape and interesting place.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different views, especially beautiful landscapes and interesting places.

The nouns 'landscape' and 'place' should be plural to match 'different views' and to indicate variety. Also 'pic' is an incorrect informal truncation; use 'pictures'. Use plural nouns after modifiers like 'different' and 'beautiful' when referring to multiple items. Suggestion: Use 'pictures' not 'pic', and pluralize countable nouns when referring to more than one (landscapes, places).

× And I usually take photos when I travel and and I share photos with friends online.

✓ I usually take photos when I travel and I share them with friends online.

Redundant 'and and' is a typographical error. Repeating the noun 'photos' is unnecessary; use a pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Maintain present simple for habitual actions (I usually take, I share). Suggestion: Remove duplicate words and use pronouns to avoid repetition: 'I share them with friends online.'

× I like rural views more because I enjoy looking at mountain and river and is much more peaceful than the river.

✓ I like rural views more because I enjoy looking at mountains and rivers and they are much more peaceful than city views.

Countable nouns 'mountain' and 'river' need plural forms when speaking generally (mountains, rivers). The clause 'is much more peaceful' lacks a subject that agrees in number; use 'they are'. Also compare rural views to 'city views' or 'urban areas' rather than repeating 'the river'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general references and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'mountains and rivers... they are'. Replace unclear comparison with 'city views' for clarity.

× The air is fresh and I feel more relaxed in the countries.

✓ The air is fresh and I feel more relaxed in the countryside.

'the countries' is incorrect for referring to rural areas; the correct noun is 'the countryside' or 'the country'. 'Countryside' is the uncountable noun used to describe rural areas in general. Suggestion: Use 'countryside' to refer to rural areas: 'I feel more relaxed in the countryside.'

× Alex Paul My country's has nine place, but I I also enjoy sees new thing in other countries.

✓ My country has nine places, but I also enjoy seeing new things in other countries.

'My country's has' has an extra apostrophe and incorrect verb placement; use 'My country has'. 'place' should be plural 'places' for multiple items. 'I I' is duplicated. 'enjoy sees' mixes verbs; after 'enjoy' use the -ing form 'seeing'. 'new thing' should be plural 'new things' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Remove punctuation errors and duplicates, use correct verb forms and plurals: 'My country has nine places, but I also enjoy seeing new things in other countries.'

× It's depend on what I want at that at the time.

✓ It depends on what I want at that time.

Use third person singular present 'depends' with the subject 'It'. Remove the extra 'at' before 'the time'; the correct phrase is 'at that time' or simply 'at the time'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid duplicate prepositions: 'It depends on what I want at that time.'