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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like because it is a memory. I like taking a picture uh, dogs and cats, umm, no animals and I like taking pictures with uh, my family and my friends because I love they.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Certain, certainly I prefer views in urban areas.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer views in other countries. I prefer I would like live live in in USA because in USA people people is very kind and.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Старайтесь отвечать чётко и грамматически правильно: используйте тему в первом предложении, избегайте заполнителей («uh», «umm»), корректной структуры и согласования слов. Уточняйте, какие именно виды вы фотографируете (пейзажи, животные, люди) и почему это важно для вас, приводя один-два конкретных примера. Также замените «I love they» на корректную форму («I love them»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because they help me keep memories. For example, I often photograph city streets and cafés when I travel, and I also take candid photos of my family and friends during gatherings. These pictures remind me of special moments and the people I care about.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Сделайте ответ более естественным и расширьте его, добавив одно-два поддерживающих предложения с конкретной причиной и примером. Избегайте лишних слов и повторов («certain, certainly»).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I like the energy and variety of a city. For instance, I enjoy photographing tall buildings, street art and busy markets, which offer interesting contrasts and vibrant scenes.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Сформулируйте чётко одно утверждение и подкрепите его конкретной причиной. Исправьте грамматические ошибки и повторения (например, «I would like to live in the USA because people are very kind»). Дайте конкретный пример того, что вам нравится в видах других стран, вместо общих фраз.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering different cultures and landscapes. For example, I would love to live in the USA for a while to photograph diverse cities like New York and natural parks like Yellowstone, and to experience the friendliness and variety of local communities.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I like because it is a memory.

Yes, I like taking pictures because they preserve memories.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure and uses 'it is a memory' which is unnatural. Use a gerund phrase 'taking pictures' as the object of 'like' and plural 'memories' since pictures preserve multiple memories. Also include 'because' to introduce the reason properly.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I like taking a picture uh, dogs and cats, umm, no animals and I like taking pictures with uh, my family and my friends because I love they.

I like taking pictures of dogs and cats, not other animals, and I enjoy taking pictures with my family and my friends because I love them.

Problems: 'a picture dogs and cats' is missing the preposition 'of' and should be plural 'pictures' for general preference; 'no animals' is unclear — replaced with 'not other animals'; 'I love they' uses an incorrect pronoun; object pronoun 'them' is required. Also use 'enjoy' or 'like' consistently.

Incorrect use of adverbs

× Certain, certainly I prefer views in urban areas.

Certainly, I prefer views in urban areas.

The word 'Certain' is redundant and incorrectly placed; 'certainly' alone is the correct adverb to express affirmation. Remove the duplicate and start the sentence with 'Certainly' followed by a comma.

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer I would like live live in in USA because in USA people people is very kind and.

I would like to live in the USA because people there are very kind.

Multiple issues: repetition of words; incorrect verb form 'would like live' needs infinitive 'to live'; article missing before 'USA' (use 'the USA'); 'people is' is subject-verb agreement error — use 'people are'; 'in the USA' should be used for location, and sentence was unfinished, so add 'there' for clarity.

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