Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and word order, remove filler sounds, and add one specific detail to support your reason. Limit to up to 4–5 short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. Photography relaxes me because I can focus on small details and forget daily stress. For example, I like capturing rivers and trees during sunset because the warm light makes the scene peaceful and colorful.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and word forms, avoid repetition, and add a specific reason using a linking word. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Rural India appeals to me because it has abundant greenery and peaceful landscapes. For example, rolling fields and small villages feel more relaxing than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Be clear about experience and use correct tense and possessive forms. Start with a direct statement, give a reason, and add a brief example or comparison. Avoid vague adjectives like 'mind blowing' without context.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I have not travelled abroad. The landscapes here are familiar and very beautiful, such as the hill stations and coastal areas I visit. For instance, the local mountains have dramatic views that I know well and enjoy photographing.

× Yes, I always like to taking photos or pictures of sceneries because it's uh, feels me like relax and it has a beautiful and peaceful nature that I take a photo.

✓ Yes, I always like taking photos or pictures of scenery because it makes me feel relaxed and the nature is beautiful and peaceful, so I take photos of it.

Original contained incorrect verb form 'to taking' (should be 'taking' after 'like'), incorrect phrase order 'feels me like relax' (should be 'makes me feel relaxed'), and awkward noun phrase 'sceneries' (use uncountable 'scenery'). Also simplified 'it has a beautiful and peaceful nature that I take a photo' to a clear clause 'the nature is beautiful and peaceful, so I take photos of it'. Suggestions: after verbs of preference use gerund (like taking); use 'make someone feel' for causing emotions; use 'scenery' as uncountable noun and 'relaxed' as adjective.

× As I am in rural areas person, I prefer to choose rural India because it has many green greenery and it has marvellous look compared to urban area.

✓ As I am a rural person, I prefer rural India because it has a lot of greenery and it looks more marvelous compared to urban areas.

Problems: 'in rural areas person' is incorrect preposition and word order; should be 'a rural person'. 'Prefer to choose' is redundant; use 'prefer'. 'Many green greenery' is incorrect collocation; use 'a lot of greenery' or 'much greenery'. 'Marvellous look' should be 'looks more marvelous' for comparison, and 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match general comparison. Suggestions: use correct article+noun order ('a rural person'), avoid redundant verbs ('prefer' not 'prefer to choose'), use standard collocations ('a lot of greenery'), and ensure plural/singular consistency.

× I had not seen any country other than mine so I prefer to go to my countries sceneries and nature because it was a mind blowing.

✓ I have not seen any country other than mine, so I prefer to visit the scenery and nature of my country because it is mind-blowing.

Errors: 'I had not seen' (past perfect) is inappropriate here; present perfect 'I have not seen' expresses life experience up to now. 'Prefer to go to my countries sceneries' has possessive and plural errors; use 'the scenery and nature of my country' or 'my country's scenery and nature'. 'It was a mind blowing' mixes past tense and incorrect article; use 'it is mind-blowing' to express a general reaction. Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences, correct possessive ('my country's'), use hyphenated adjective 'mind-blowing', and keep tense consistent for present preferences.