Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise by correcting grammar, avoiding repetition, and adding a brief reason or example. Use one clear topic sentence, one linking phrase, and one specific detail. Also correct verb forms and article use (e.g., "a photograph").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of scenic views. For example, when I visit a park or a coastline, I often photograph interesting landscapes because I like capturing light and color.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence stating preference, then add a specific reason using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "present to my eyes"; instead describe what makes a view appealing. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy both urban and rural views. Urban scenes interest me for their architecture and nightlife, whereas rural landscapes appeal because of peaceful nature and open spaces.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent by using correct conditional forms and removing filler words like "uh." State your preference, give a brief reason, and include a clear example of what you enjoy. Use linking words such as "however" or "also" for coherence.

Ví dụ: At the moment I prefer views in my own country because I can easily visit mountains and coastal areas. However, I would definitely like to see views abroad someday, for instance the famous sunsets in Santorini or mountain ranges in Switzerland.

× Whenever I go outside and I've found any scenic view, I love to take photograph of that.

✓ Whenever I go outside and find a scenic view, I love to take a photograph of it.

The original contains incorrect verb forms and article use. 'I've found' (present perfect) is odd with 'Whenever I go' (present simple); use simple present 'find' for habitual actions. 'Any scenic view' should be 'a scenic view' for a singular countable noun in this context. 'Take photograph of that' misses the article 'a' and should use 'it' to refer to the view. Suggestion: use consistent simple present for habitual statements and include appropriate articles and pronouns.

× I prefer both views in the rural area as well as in the urban areas.

✓ I prefer both rural and urban views.

The phrase mixes singular and plural ('the rural area' vs 'urban areas') and is wordy. Use plural 'views' to match 'both' and parallel adjectives 'rural and urban' for clarity. Suggestion: simplify to 'rural and urban views'.

× It depends upon the view.

✓ It depends on the view.

'Depends upon' is grammatically acceptable but formal/awkward here; 'depends on' is the more natural collocation in spoken English. Suggestion: use 'depends on' for natural speech.

× So I love both kinds of views.

✓ So I love both kinds of view.

Actually, the original 'both kinds of views' is not ungrammatical, but slightly redundant after the previous corrected sentence. Preferred concise form is 'I love both kinds of view' or simply 'I love both kinds of views'—choose consistency. Suggestion: keep 'I love both kinds of views' if retaining plurality. (If following strict minimal change, use 'I love both kinds of views'.)

× If I would get an opportunity to visit another country, I would love to see that views also.

✓ If I got an opportunity to visit another country, I would love to see those views as well.

In conditional sentences, 'if' clause should use simple past for hypothetical present ('If I got an opportunity...'), not 'would'. 'That views' mixes demonstrative and plural; use 'those views'. 'Also' is better as 'as well' in this position. Suggestion: use correct second conditional structure and matching demonstrative pronoun.

× But right now I'm happy to see the views, especially the views of the mountain, sunset and uh, sunrise in my country.

✓ But right now I'm happy to see the views, especially the mountains, sunsets, and sunrises in my country.

Parallel plural forms improve clarity: use 'mountains, sunsets, and sunrises' instead of singular nouns. Also remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to these phenomena in general and maintain parallel structure in lists.