Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and add one or two specific supporting details linked with cohesive devices. Correct verb forms and pronouns (e.g., "I like taking photos of different views") and combine short fragmented sentences. Keep the answer within four sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I often ask strangers or fellow travelers to take pictures of me and my friends, which has helped me get some candid shots. For example, once I met a friendly celebrity on a trip and asked them to take a photo with us, which was a memorable experience.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct answer first, then give two concise supporting reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "it depends" not "it's really depends") and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "architecture" instead of "brain building"). Avoid vague ending sentence; conclude logically.

Ví dụ: It depends, but I prefer urban areas. Urban places offer diverse architecture and cultural activities, and I enjoy observing local people and street life. However, I also visit rural areas sometimes for peaceful landscapes and nature.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and expand with specific reasons and examples, using correct grammar and linking words. Replace awkward phrases (e.g., "I have lived in my hometown for over 20 years") and combine fragments into full sentences. Mention particular aspects you want to explore abroad (culture, cuisine, history) to be more specific.

Ví dụ: I prefer visiting other countries because I have lived in my hometown for over 20 years and want to broaden my horizons. Traveling abroad lets me experience different cultures, meet new people, and try unique cuisines in local restaurants, which I find very exciting.

× Sure I am.

✓ Sure, I do.

The student used 'I am' incorrectly in response to 'Do you like...?' A binary question requires an auxiliary 'do' for affirmative: 'Yes, I do' or 'Sure, I do.' Suggestion: use 'Yes, I do' or 'Sure, I do.'

× I always want you to take picture with what I see.

✓ I always want to take pictures of what I see.

The original sentence misuses 'you' and the prepositions. The speaker means they want to take pictures of scenes they see; use the verb 'take' with object 'pictures' (plural) and preposition 'of'. Suggestion: say 'I always want to take pictures of what I see.'

× And also I love to talk to passengers there who is free.

✓ I also love to talk to passengers who are free.

The relative clause refers to 'passengers' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also 'there' is unnecessary. Suggestion: 'I also love to talk to passengers who are free.'

× Then maybe he can take picture of us.

✓ Then maybe they can take a picture of us.

Use gender-neutral 'they' because the passenger's gender is unknown and use the singular countable noun 'a picture' with article 'a'. Suggestion: 'Then maybe they can take a picture of us.'

× Take picture of my friends.

✓ They take pictures of my friends.

This fragment lacks subject and proper tense. To fit context, make it a complete sentence: 'They take pictures of my friends.' Use plural 'pictures' if multiple. Suggestion: 'They take pictures of my friends.'

× And one time I remember I talked to a celebrity he's taking picture of.

✓ Once I remember talking to a celebrity who was taking pictures.

Original mixes tenses and lacks proper relative clause. Use 'who was taking pictures' to describe the celebrity's action in past. Alternatively: 'Once I remember talking to a celebrity who was taking a picture.' Suggestion: maintain past tense and use 'who' for the relative clause.

× Umm, it's really depends.

✓ Umm, it really depends.

Use subject 'it' with base verb 'depends' without 'is'. 'It depends' is correct present simple. Suggestion: 'It really depends.'

× Sometimes I love go to urban areas, sometimes I want to go to rural areas.

✓ Sometimes I love going to urban areas; sometimes I want to go to rural areas.

After 'love' the gerund 'going' is required. The second clause is fine but keep parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'love going to...' or 'I love to go to...'.

× But I think I prefer urban areas more than rural areas.

✓ But I think I prefer urban areas to rural areas.

When comparing preferences, use 'prefer A to B' rather than 'prefer A more than B.' 'Prefer...to...' is idiomatic. Suggestion: 'I prefer urban areas to rural areas.'

× I like to see their culture in their brain building and people.

✓ I like to see the culture in their buildings and meet the people.

'Their brain building' is nonsensical; likely meant 'beautiful buildings' or 'historic buildings.' Use 'the culture' and plural 'buildings' and verb 'meet' for people. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective: 'beautiful buildings' or 'historic buildings.'

× So I think if I go to other areas then I can.

✓ So I think if I go to other areas, I can learn more about them.

Sentence is incomplete. Add the intended result 'learn more about them' to complete thought. Suggestion: explicitly state what 'can' refers to.

× I prefer visits other countries because I already live in the hometown like over 20 years.

✓ I prefer visiting other countries because I have already lived in my hometown for over 20 years.

Use gerund 'visiting' after 'prefer'. 'I have already lived' expresses duration up to now; use 'in my hometown' and 'for over 20 years' for period. Suggestion: 'I prefer visiting other countries because I have lived in my hometown for over 20 years.'

× I want to look worldwide and learn more.

✓ I want to travel the world and learn more.

'Look worldwide' is unnatural. Use 'travel the world' or 'see the world' to express visiting many countries. Suggestion: 'travel the world' or 'see the world.'

× Different culture and different people.

✓ Different cultures and different people.

Use plural 'cultures' to match 'different' and form a complete noun phrase. Also better to make complete sentence: 'I can experience different cultures and meet different people.' Suggestion: make it a full sentence.

× Even have some cuisine in different restaurants.

✓ There are also different cuisines in various restaurants.

Original lacks subject and verb. Use 'there are' to state existence and plural 'cuisines.' Suggestion: 'There are also different cuisines in various restaurants.'