Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two brief reasons using linking words, avoid fillers and repetition. For example, say you prefer to keep memories in your mind and briefly explain why (emotion, experience). Keep answers to under 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take pictures of views because I prefer to store the memory in my mind. For me, looking at a scene and remembering how it felt is more meaningful than photographing it, and it helps me stay present in the moment.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas and correct grammar (plural/singular, adjectives).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they make me feel calm and relaxed. For example, I enjoy quiet walks by the river and the fresh air helps me unwind after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and explain with a clear, specific reason. Avoid hesitation sounds and vague words; use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and provide a short example or contrast. Correct phrasing: 'I prefer views from other countries to those from my town.'

Ví dụ: I prefer views from other countries to those from my town because they offer new and different landscapes. For instance, I enjoy seeing architecture and nature I've never seen before, which feels exciting and inspiring.

× Actually I don't like because I want to remember good, uh, scenic scenic view in my brain if I.

✓ Actually I don't, because I want to remember a good scenic view in my mind.

The original sentence has several issues: unnecessary filler words, repeated word 'scenic', incorrect conditional 'if I' and awkward phrasing 'in my brain'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correction removes redundancy, uses the article 'a' before 'good scenic view', and replaces 'in my brain' with the more natural 'in my mind'. Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, avoid filler words, and use 'mind' rather than 'brain' for recalling memories.

× I like rural area because I think it makes me my feeling good and relaxed.

✓ I like rural areas because I think they make me feel good and relaxed.

The sentence uses singular 'rural area' where a general preference requires plural 'rural areas' and has incorrect structure 'makes me my feeling good'. This is a singular/plural and subject-verb agreement issue (ID 1 and relates to 27). Correction uses 'rural areas' and plural pronoun 'they' with verb 'make' and correct verb phrase 'feel good'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about types of places and use 'make me feel' for emotions.

× I like I prefer other countries picture than my towns one because it was MMM. It's interesting for me.

✓ I prefer pictures of other countries to pictures of my town because they are more interesting to me.

The original has repeated 'I like I prefer', incorrect nouns 'other countries picture' and 'my towns one', awkward comparison 'than', and filler 'MMM'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also article/quantifier problems (ID 22/14). Correction simplifies to 'I prefer pictures of other countries to pictures of my town' and uses 'they are more interesting to me' to explain why. Suggestion: avoid repeating verbs, use 'prefer A to B' structure, use plural 'pictures' or 'a picture of my town', and remove fillers like 'MMM'.