Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and filler words. Also use correct verb forms and plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing natural scenery. For example, when I visited Pokhara I took many photos of the Himalayas at sunrise. I also enjoy photographing everyday scenes, such as mothers caring for their children, because they show real emotion and tell a story.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clear comparisons. Begin with a topic sentence stating your preference or that it depends, then explain why with specific examples and linking words (e.g., however, because, for example). Fix grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation: I enjoy both urban and rural views for different reasons. Urban areas like Kathmandu interest me because of their architecture and lively street scenes, while rural areas appeal to me for dramatic landscapes, such as the Himalayan foothills. For example, in the city I focus on markets and temples, but in the countryside I photograph mountains and terraced fields.

Gợi ý: State a clear preference and give specific reasons and examples. Use correct nouns and place names, and avoid unclear phrases. Link your ideas with words like because and for example. Correct tense and word choice will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has stunning Himalayan scenery that I love to photograph. For example, I recently took many photos in the Annapurna region and around Muktinath, where the mountain views and local culture were very photogenic.

× As I have been always out for the holy person or a photo lover person, I like to take picture of different views.

✓ As I have always been a devout person and a photography lover, I like to take pictures of different views.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and word order. 'Have been always' should be 'have always been' (adverb placement). 'Out for the holy person' is unclear; replaced with 'a devout person'. 'A photo lover person' is redundant; use 'a photography lover'. 'Take picture' needs plural 'pictures' when referring to various views. Improve clarity and word choice. Suggestion: Place adverbs before the main verb ('have always been') and use concise noun phrases ('photography lover', 'take pictures').

× I like uh loving to a mother's photos or a scenery or a natural vibes and a leg for tooth and many others.

✓ I like loving my mother's photos, scenery, natural landscapes, and many other subjects.

Multiple article and noun form errors: 'to a mother's photos' should be 'my mother's photos' (possessive). 'a scenery' is incorrect; 'scenery' is uncountable so no article. 'natural vibes' is informal; 'natural landscapes' is clearer. 'a leg for tooth' is nonsensical and likely misheard; replaced with 'and many other subjects' to generalize. Suggest using correct possessives and uncountable noun forms and clearer vocabulary. Suggestion: Use possessive pronouns for ownership and avoid adding 'a' before uncountable nouns ('scenery').

× For example, I went to a Pokhara and I click photos of a Himalaya.

✓ For example, I went to Pokhara and I clicked photos of the Himalayas.

Mixed past and present tense: 'went' is past so 'click' must be past 'clicked'. Article use: 'a Pokhara' is wrong; use 'Pokhara' without an article. 'a Himalaya' should be 'the Himalayas' (plural mountain range with definite article). Suggest keeping verb tenses consistent and using correct articles for place names and ranges. Suggestion: Match past actions with past verbs and use 'the Himalayas' for the mountain range.

× It prefers in a different situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'It prefers in a different situation' is an incorrect pronoun and verb use. The intended meaning is 'it depends on the situation'. Use 'depends on' to express preference varying by context. Suggestion: Use 'depends on' for conditional preferences.

× If I am at a urban areas like Kathmandu or other cities, I like to click about their mystery and in a rural area I like to click like Himalayan dreams for example.

✓ If I am in an urban area like Kathmandu or other cities, I like to take photos of their landmarks or mysteries; in a rural area I like to take photos of the Himalayan scenery, for example.

'At a urban areas' has article and preposition errors: use 'in an urban area' (singular) or 'in urban areas' (plural) and 'an' before vowel sound. 'Click about their mystery' is awkward; use 'take photos of their landmarks or mysteries'. 'In a rural area I like to click like Himalayan dreams' is ungrammatical; clarify to 'take photos of the Himalayan scenery'. Suggest using 'in' for locations, correct articles ('an urban area'), and use 'take photos of' rather than 'click'.

× I I recently take photos.

✓ I recently took photos.

Tense mismatch: 'recently' indicates a past action, so use past simple 'took' rather than present 'take'. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggest aligning time adverbs with past tense verbs for completed actions.

× I like my own country rather than other countries in a few because my country is one of the most beautiful and Himalayan country and I like to click photos of Himalayas.

✓ I prefer my own country to other countries because my country is one of the most beautiful Himalayan countries, and I like to take photos of the Himalayas.

Use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'like X rather than Y'. 'In a few' is unclear and removed. 'One of the most beautiful and Himalayan country' mixes structures; change to 'one of the most beautiful Himalayan countries' (plural). 'Click photos of Himalayas' corrected to 'take photos of the Himalayas' and add 'the' for the mountain range. Suggest using correct comparative verbs ('prefer to') and proper noun phrase agreement ('one of the ... countries').

× Recently I had a click e-mail or in photos of like Arnappuno and Matsapuramal.

✓ Recently I took photos of places like Annapurna and Machapuchare.

'Had a click e-mail' is meaningless; replace with 'took photos'. Use past tense 'took' for recent completed actions. 'Arnappuno' and 'Matsapuramal' appear to be misspellings of 'Annapurna' and 'Machapuchare' (or similar); corrected to common mountain names. Also remove 'e-mail or in'. Suggest using clear verb 'took photos of' and check proper nouns spelling. Suggestion: When naming places, verify correct spellings and use past tense for recent completed actions.