Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and directly responds, but filler words (“uh”) and a slight redundancy reduce naturalness. To improve, remove fillers, make one concise topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (why you enjoy it or a recent example). Use a linking word if adding support.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. For example, I like capturing sunsets because the changing colors create dramatic scenes, and I often share my best shots with friends.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear preference, but sentence is long with many fillers and minor grammar issues. Improve by giving a concise topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details linked with words like “because” or “for example.” Correct grammar (e.g., “near a mountain” → “near a mountain” is okay but remove extra articles) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I live near a mountain and often go hiking on weekends. For example, I photograph wide valleys and forested ridges to capture peaceful landscapes.

Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors (e.g., “another countries”). Improve clarity by giving a direct topic sentence (I prefer views in my country) and one clear reason or example. Remove fillers and finish the thought; if you haven’t traveled, say so succinctly and explain why you wouldn’t compare.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't traveled abroad yet and I feel more connected to local landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing the familiar mountain scenes that remind me of home.

× Yes, of course, I like taking pictures of different views, so I have, uh, thousands of photos in my gallery.

✓ Yes, of course, I like taking pictures of different views, so I have thousands of photos in my gallery.

Remove the extra commas and filler words to improve fluency. There is no singular/plural error in content; main problem is punctuation and unnecessary hesitation fillers. Suggestion: avoid filler words like 'uh' in spoken answers and use smooth phrasing.

× I would choose rural areas, uh, because since I live in near a mountain, I often, uh, go hiking with my friends on weekends and I try to capture, uh, the view of the landscape and I really like it.

✓ I would choose rural areas because I live near a mountain, so I often go hiking with my friends on weekends and try to capture the landscape views, which I really like.

Problems: 'in near a mountain' is incorrect preposition use — correct is 'near a mountain' or 'in a mountainous area'. Also 'since' was redundant when 'because' is used; combine ideas with 'so'. Suggestions: use correct prepositions ('near', 'in') and avoid repeating conjunctions; simplify filler words.

× I would choose rural areas, uh, because since I live in near a mountain, I often, uh, go hiking with my friends on weekends and I try to capture, uh, the view of the landscape and I really like it.

✓ I would choose rural areas because I live near a mountain, so I often go hiking with my friends on weekends and try to capture landscape views, which I really like.

'The view of the landscape' is acceptable but 'landscape views' is more natural when referring to multiple photos. This addresses plurality consistency. Suggestion: match singular/plural between nouns and the intended meaning (multiple photos -> plural 'views').

× Frankly speaking, I've never been to another countries and I can see it, but I don't want to look at the nature, uh, separately like this, like to compare, uh, my country and, uh, and other countries.

✓ Frankly speaking, I've never been to other countries, and I can understand that, but I don't want to look at nature separately or compare my country with other countries.

'Another countries' is incorrect: 'another' cannot modify plural 'countries'. Use 'other countries'. Also 'the nature' is unnatural here; use 'nature' without an article. Suggestions: use 'other' for plural, drop unnecessary articles, and avoid double conjunctions and filler words.

× Frankly speaking, I've never been to another countries and I can see it, but I don't want to look at the nature, uh, separately like this, like to compare, uh, my country and, uh, and other countries.

✓ Frankly speaking, I've never been to other countries, and I can understand that, but I don't want to look at nature separately or compare my country with other countries.

'I can see it' is unclear pronoun reference; better to say 'I can understand that' to refer to the idea mentioned. Also remove repeated 'and'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns or noun phrases that unambiguously refer to earlier ideas.