Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g., 'talking' → likely 'taking', 'place' → 'places'), and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to add a specific supporting detail (when/why/how). Keep answer under 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I love taking photos of landscapes when I travel because photographs help me remember special places and moments. For example, I often experiment with different angles and lighting to capture dramatic sunsets, and then I share my best shots with friends on social media.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar, give a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Replace incorrect words ('a rural areas' → 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'; 'felts' and 'talk' are wrong). Use linking words to structure reasons and an example. Keep within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery such as mountains and rivers. It feels more peaceful and relaxing, so I often feel refreshed after a short walk in the countryside. For instance, I like photographing sunsets over fields and breathing the fresh air while composing each shot.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and vocabulary, give a clear topic sentence and concise supporting details with linking words. Remove duplicated/incorrect words ('foreigner foreign', 'it is on', 'complementally'). Provide a short example comparing each preference.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both views at home and abroad. Locally, I appreciate familiar scenes and the comfort they bring, while traveling abroad offers new cultures and landscapes that excite me. For example, I like revisiting my hometown's coastline but I also love discovering historic cityscapes when I travel overseas.

× Talking and taking a photo helps me remember special moments and place, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

✓ Talking and taking photos help me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

The verbs 'talking and taking' form a compound subject and require the plural verb 'help' (subject-verb agreement). 'Taking a photo' should be pluralized to 'taking photos' to match general activity, and 'place' should be plural 'places' to match 'moments' and the intended meaning. Use parallel plural nouns for clarity.

× Photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experience with different angles and lighting to get the perfect.

✓ Photography is a relaxing hobby for me and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting to get the perfect shot.

The verb 'experience' is incorrect in this context; 'experiment' is the appropriate verb when trying different approaches. The phrase 'to get the perfect' is incomplete and needs a noun like 'shot'. Using the correct verb and completing the phrase clarifies the meaning.

× Personally, I prefer the view in a rural areas.

✓ Personally, I prefer the view in rural areas.

The phrase incorrectly combines the singular article 'a' with the plural noun phrase 'rural areas'. Removing 'a' makes the noun phrase grammatically correct. Alternatively, use 'a rural area' for a singular reference.

× I love nature scenery like mountains, rivers and felts.

✓ I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields.

'Nature scenery' is not the correct adjectival form; use 'natural scenery'. 'Felts' is incorrect for landscape features; the intended word is 'fields'. Using correct adjective forms and vocabulary fixes meaning and grammar.

× It is much more peaceful and relaxing and I always feel refreshed when I talk. Take photos of sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ It is much more peaceful and relaxing and I always feel refreshed when I go there, take photos of the sunset, or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

Sentences were fragmented and contained incorrect verbs: 'when I talk' is wrong contextually—should be 'when I go there'. The second part began with an imperative 'Take photos...' which doesn't fit as a continuation; changing to 'take photos' in parallel with 'go there' makes a coherent list of activities. Also add 'the' before 'sunset' for specificity.

× To be honest, I enjoy both local and foreigner foreign views.

✓ To be honest, I enjoy both local and foreign views.

'Foreigner' is a noun and incorrectly paired with 'foreign'; the correct adjective is 'foreign'. Also 'local and foreign views' is concise and grammatical; remove the redundant word.

× Each place has it is on unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery while other times I crave the excitement of exploring somewhere complementally new.

✓ Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery while other times I crave the excitement of exploring somewhere completely new.

'It is on' is a mistaken sequence; the possessive pronoun 'its' and adjective 'own' should be used: 'its own'. 'Complementally' is incorrect; the intended adverb is 'completely'. Fixing pronoun and word choice corrects meaning and grammar.