Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğal ve doğru dilbilgisiyle verilmelidir. Konu cümlesi net olmalı, ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar eklenmelidir. Örneğin, fiil hataları ("a pictures", "shut") düzeltilmeli, gereksiz tekrarlar kaldırılmalı ve neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğiniz kısa bir örnekle açıklanmalıdır. Bağlaçlar (for example, because) kullanılarak cümleler akıcı hale getirilmeli.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember places. For example, I often capture wide landscapes to show the whole scene, and later I crop or edit them to highlight interesting details.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi düzeltilmeli; fiil formlarına dikkat edilmeli ("prefer taking photos"), gereksiz dolgu kelimeler ("uh") çıkarılmalı ve "green and blue area" gibi belirsiz ifadeler somutlaştırılmalı. Bağlaçlarla sebep-sonuç ilişkisi netleştirilmeli ve bir örnekle desteklenmeli (ör. parklar, gökdelenler).

Ví dụ: I generally prefer taking photos in urban areas because they offer a mix of architecture and green spaces. For instance, city parks next to modern buildings create strong contrasts that make my pictures more interesting.

Gợi ý: Cevap daha akıcı ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Tekil/çoğul uyumuna dikkat edin ("places" ve "is/are"), gereksiz tekrarlar kaldırılmalı ve neden ülkenizdeki manzaraları tercih ettiğinizi açıkça belirtin. Kısa bir gerekçe ve bir örnek (ör. tarihi yerler, doğal güzellikler) ekleyin ve bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I know the best spots and their stories. For example, I often shoot historic sites and coastal landscapes at sunrise, which shows their colours and atmosphere beautifully.

× I like taking a pictures and I want to see everywhere in the pictures, so I always try to shut a picture which is already in it.

✓ I like taking pictures and I want to see everything in the pictures, so I always try to shoot a picture that captures it.

The noun 'pictures' is plural, so using 'a pictures' is incorrect; use 'pictures' without 'a'. 'Everywhere in the pictures' is unnatural; 'everything in the pictures' or 'every detail in the pictures' is correct. 'Shut a picture' is a misspelling/word choice error; the verb should be 'shoot' when talking about taking a photograph. 'Which is already in it' is unclear; 'that captures it' or 'that shows it' clarifies the intended meaning. Suggestions: remove incorrect article with plural nouns, choose precise verbs (shoot), and rephrase for clarity.

× I generally prefer to taking a pictures in urban areas because urban areas consist of lots of green and, uh, blue area and this makes pictures awesome.

✓ I generally prefer taking pictures in urban areas because urban areas have a lot of green and blue spaces, and this makes pictures look awesome.

After 'prefer' the base gerund form is 'taking' but not preceded by 'to'; the correct structure is either 'prefer taking' or 'prefer to take'. 'To taking' is wrong (incorrect use of verb + -ing after 'to'). 'A pictures' again mixes article and plural. 'Consist of lots of green and blue area' is incorrect: use 'have a lot of green and blue spaces' or 'consist of many green and blue areas'. Also add 'look' before 'awesome' to describe appearance. Suggestions: use either 'prefer taking' or 'prefer to take', remove incorrect articles with plural nouns, and use appropriate nouns (spaces/areas) for colors.

× I prefer taking a pictures in my country which is awesome places.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in my country, which has many awesome places.

Again, 'a pictures' is wrong; remove the article and use 'pictures' or 'a picture'. 'Which is awesome places' mixes singular 'which' referring to 'my country' with plural 'places' and wrong verb structure; use 'which has many awesome places' to correctly relate the country to its places. Suggestions: match singular/plural forms and use correct relative clause structure.

× And this places. Worth taking a pictures?

✓ And these places are worth taking pictures of?

'This places' should be 'these places' to match plural demonstrative. The fragment 'Worth taking a pictures?' lacks a verb and has wrong article with plural noun: use 'are worth taking pictures of?' or 'are worth photographing?'. Also prefer 'photographing' or 'taking pictures of' without the article 'a' before 'pictures'. Suggestions: use correct demonstrative for plural (these), include the verb 'are', and remove 'a' before plural nouns or use singular 'a place' if needed.'