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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

A Yes, I am big fan of photographing. When I go outside, see something beautiful or interesting, I will take out my phone to take to capture it and then I will share online with my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer the modern buildings. They are very beautiful When when the night when the night comes, all lights come up, all night up.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

In fact, I prefer using our own country, uh, because our country has a long history and we have a lot of ancient buildings such as the Great Wall, the palace, uh, I for and so on. And uh, I haven't visit them all, uh.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且語法正確,避免重複與口頭語。可以用一個主題句開頭,然後用1–2句具體細節支持,並使用連接詞使語意順暢。例如說明你拍照的目的、常用工具或最喜歡拍的題材。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I see something beautiful or interesting, I usually take out my phone to capture it and later share the best shots with friends online, especially landscapes and street scenes.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要結構清晰並避免重複。開頭直接表明偏好,接著用1–2個具體理由並用連接詞銜接。描述要具體,例如夜景如何吸引你及其特色。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I love modern architecture. At night the buildings are illuminated with lights, which creates a vibrant and dramatic atmosphere that I find very appealing.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 表達要更精簡並避免填充詞(如 uh)。先給出明確答案,然後用具體例子支持,並可以簡短說明原因或未來計劃。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has a long history and many ancient sites, like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. I haven't visited all of them yet, so I enjoy exploring and photographing these historical places.

Ngữ pháp

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× A Yes, I am big fan of photographing.

Yes, I am a big fan of photographing.

句子缺少不定冠词“a”,导致名词短语“a big fan”不完整。这是冠词/代词使用错误的表现。建议记住英文中表示某一类人的短语(a fan, a teacher 等)通常需要不定冠词“a”或“an”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× When I go outside, see something beautiful or interesting, I will take out my phone to take to capture it and then I will share online with my friends.

When I go outside and see something beautiful or interesting, I will take out my phone to capture it and then I will share it online with my friends.

原句缺少连词和主语,出现重复和多余动词(“take to capture”)。这是句子结构错误。建议:使用连词“and”连接并列动作,确保每个从句有主语,去掉多余词并把“share online with my friends”改为“share it online with my friends”以明确宾语。

6: Present tense issue

× Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer the modern buildings.

Personally, I prefer views in urban areas because I prefer modern buildings.

句中“the modern buildings”使用了定冠词“the”,但在泛指喜欢建筑这一概念时不需要“the”。这是现在时语境下的冠词使用和时态一致性问题。建议在表达一般偏好时使用一般现在时并省略不必要的定冠词:prefer modern buildings。

26: Sentence structure errors

× They are very beautiful When when the night when the night comes, all lights come up, all night up.

They are very beautiful. When night comes, all the lights come on.

原句有重复(多次出现 when)、大小写错误和不自然短语“all night up”。这是句子结构和用词错误。建议把句子拆成两句,删除重复,使用习惯表达“lights come on”。同时在特定情况下使用定冠词“the lights”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× In fact, I prefer using our own country, uh, because our country has a long history and we have a lot of ancient buildings such as the Great Wall, the palace, uh, I for and so on.

In fact, I prefer my own country, because our country has a long history and we have a lot of ancient buildings such as the Great Wall and the palaces, and I haven't visited them all.

原句中“prefer using our own country”搭配不当,应为“prefer my own country”。“the palace”若泛指多座古建筑应为复数“palaces”。另外“I for and so on”不通,且“haven't visit”动词时态错误(见下一条)。这是代词和名词形式使用错误。建议用“prefer my own country”和将“palace”改为复数或具体名称,整理句子结构。

5: Past tense issue

× And uh, I haven't visit them all, uh.

And I haven't visited them all.

使用现在完成时(haven't)时,后面应该用过去分词“visited”,原句用了动词原形“visit”,这是时态/动词形式错误。建议记住现在完成时结构是 have/has + 过去分词。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
InterestingAbsorbing
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
ModernPresent-day; Fashionable
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