Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it's slightly long and repetitive. Start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking phrase. Avoid listing too many items and use varied vocabulary to sound more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography lets me capture meaningful moments. For example, I often photograph animals in action and natural landscapes, since their movement and light create striking images.

Gợi ý: Your response answers the question and includes reasons, but the phrasing is formal and slightly vague (e.g., 'grave reality'). Use clearer, more natural adjectives and add a specific example or contrast with a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they feel calmer and more scenic compared with noisy urban streets. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet fields and old cottages, which show traditional life and peaceful atmospheres.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and gives a reason, but avoid broad generalizations and improve cohesion by using linking words. Offer a specific example of a country or scene you prefer to make the point more concrete and natural.

Ví dụ: I generally prefer views in less populated countries because they often feel cleaner and more tranquil. For example, I enjoyed photographing coastal villages in New Zealand, where open beaches and few people made the scenery more charming.

× I feel thrilled taking pictures of different views because this gives me an opportunity to showcase my photography skills and to capture precious moments.

✓ I feel thrilled when taking pictures of different views because this gives me an opportunity to showcase my photography skills and capture precious moments.

The original omits a connector before the -ing clause. Using 'when taking' clarifies the time relationship; also 'to capture' can be streamlined to 'capture' for parallelism with 'showcase'. Suggestion: use 'when' before '-ing' to show timing and keep parallel verb forms.

× I like to take pictures of animals in action, scenery, nature, kids playing, anything that is memorable enough to be captured.

✓ I like to take pictures of animals in action, scenery, nature, and kids playing—anything memorable enough to be captured.

The list lacked a coordinating conjunction before the final item ('and') and had a comma splice before the fragment 'anything...'. Also 'anything that is' can be shortened to 'anything memorable' for conciseness. Suggestion: use 'and' in lists and avoid comma splices; combine related ideas with a dash or conjunction.

× I prefer the views of rural areas more because I believe that urban areas depict the hustle and bustle of modern life, whereas rural areas are fascinating because they project a more grave reality of life and reminders of what the world was once like.

✓ I prefer rural views because I believe that urban areas depict the hustle and bustle of modern life, whereas rural areas are fascinating because they reflect a graver reality and remind us what the world once was like.

Using 'the views of rural areas more' is awkward; 'prefer rural views' is natural. 'Project a more grave reality of life' is wordy and uses 'project' awkwardly; 'reflect a graver reality' is clearer. 'Reminders of' should be 'remind us' to make it an active clause. Suggestion: simplify phrasing, use active verbs ('reflect', 'remind'), and avoid redundant phrases like 'of life' when context is clear.

× I prefer views in countries which are less populated unlike India where I live.

✓ I prefer views in countries that are less populated than India, where I live.

'Unlike India where I live' is incorrectly connected; comparative structure requires 'less ... than India'. Also 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses. Suggestion: use 'less ... than' for comparisons and include a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'where I live'.

× I think having lesser number of people helps the country remain more clean and adds a charm which is diluted in overpopulated countries.

✓ I think having a smaller number of people helps a country stay cleaner and adds a charm that is diluted in overpopulated countries.

'Lesser number of people' is unidiomatic; use 'a smaller number of people'. 'More clean' should be 'cleaner' (comparative adjective). 'Adds a charm which' is better as 'adds a charm that' for defining clause. Also 'the country' is too specific; 'a country' fits general statement. Suggestion: use standard quantifier phrases ('a smaller number of people'), proper comparative forms ('cleaner'), and 'that' for defining relative clauses.