Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、発話に詰まり（uh, umm）が多く、文法や語順の誤り、小さな繰り返しが見られます。改善点は次の通りです：1) 無駄なフィラーを減らす。2) 主題文（topic sentence）を明確にし、Supporting detailsを2文以内で具体的に述べる（どのような場所を、どんな雰囲気が好きか）。3) 文法と語順を簡潔に整える。4) 5文以内に収める練習をする。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often visit mountains and the sea, and I like capturing their unique atmosphere, such as misty mornings in the mountains or bright, reflective water at the coast. These images help me remember the feeling of each place.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、文法の誤り（冠詞、時制、前置詞）、繰り返し、フィラーが多く、接続が弱いです。改善するには：1) 主文で好みを明確に述べる。2) 過去の経験を述べるときは時制を統一する。3) 理由を述べる際に接続詞（because, so, which）を使って論理的に繋げる。4) 具体的なエピソード一つを短く添える。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I grew up in a rural part of my prefecture. As a child, I often went to the mountains and the sea, so those landscapes feel familiar and calming to me.

Gợi ý: 意見は示されていますが、語彙の選択と発音の混乱（watch → see）、多いフィラー、繰り返しが目立ちます。改善策：1) シンプルで正確な語を使う（prefer seeing / prefer views of）。2) 理由を一文で簡潔に述べ、具体例（何が好きか）を一つ加える。3) フィラーを避け、流暢さを高める練習をする。

Ví dụ: I prefer seeing views in my own country because I love Japan's atmosphere, especially in the countryside. For example, the quiet rice fields and traditional villages create a peaceful feeling I rarely find abroad.

× I prefer taking pictures of different views because I like to visit, uh, various places like mountain and sea when I visit.

✓ I prefer taking pictures of different views because I like to visit various places like the mountains and the sea when I visit them.

You omitted articles before 'mountain' and 'sea' and omitted the object after 'visit'. In English countable nouns used in a general sense require 'the' with geographical features (the mountains, the sea) or plural forms. Also add 'them' or repeat the object to complete 'visit'. Suggestion: use 'the mountains and the sea' or 'mountains and the sea' and include the object pronoun 'them' if needed.

× When I visit there, I often take pictures and enjoy their atmosphere.

✓ When I visit there, I often take pictures and enjoy the atmosphere.

Using 'their atmosphere' implies plural antecedents, but 'there' refers to a place, better matched with singular 'the atmosphere'. Use 'the atmosphere' to refer to the general feeling of a place. Suggestion: use 'the atmosphere' or specify plural places and keep 'their' if appropriate.

× I prefer rural areas, uh, because I was born in rural area in of my prefecture.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I was born in a rural area in my prefecture.

You need the indefinite article 'a' before 'rural area'. Also remove the unnecessary 'of' after 'in'. Use 'in my prefecture' to indicate location. Suggestion: 'born in a rural area in my prefecture.'

× Uh, when I was a child, I often go to mountain and the sea.

✓ When I was a child, I often went to the mountains and the sea.

The main clause is in the past ('when I was a child'), so the habitual action should use past tense 'went' not 'go'. Also add 'the' and plural 'mountains' for natural expression. Suggestion: match past context with past tense verbs and correct articles.

× It was great experience for me so that I like.

✓ It was a great experience for me, so I liked it.

The original sentence lacks the article 'a' and uses awkward connector 'so that' with present 'I like'. In past context use 'I liked it' or rephrase to present ('so I like it') if still true. Suggestion: use 'It was a great experience for me, so I liked it' or 'It was a great experience for me, so I still like it.'

× I prefer watch, I prefer seeing umm or, or my country's views because I really like Japan's atmosphere especially I like rural areas atmosphere, countryside atmosphere, UMM for example.

✓ I prefer watching, or rather seeing my country's views because I really like Japan's atmosphere, especially the countryside atmosphere.

Use verb+ing after 'prefer' when comparing activities: 'prefer watching' or 'prefer seeing'. 'My country's views' is fine, but avoid repeating 'I prefer' and filler 'umm'. Use 'the countryside atmosphere' with 'the'. Also 'Japan's atmosphere' is fine but combine phrases clearly. Suggestion: 'I prefer seeing my country's views because I really like Japan's atmosphere, especially the countryside.'