Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, etcetera) and redundancy (gallery repeated). Add one specific example and a linking phrase to expand. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because I love preserving diverse landscapes and landmarks. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and old town squares, which remind me of trips I’ve taken. When I look back through these photos, they help me relive those moments.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence then support with two clear, specific reasons linked logically. Remove vague phrases and filler. Use comparative language and an example to illustrate your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they offer natural scenery and wildlife. For instance, when I visit the countryside I can photograph rolling hills, streams and grazing animals, whereas city views are usually limited to buildings and streets.

Gợi ý: Avoid exaggerated, absolute claims (e.g., ‘most beautiful in the whole entire world’). Provide a clear reasoned opinion with specific details and a brief example. Use varied vocabulary but stay natural and concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because our countryside offers a wide variety of landscapes and wildlife. For example, I can see beaches, mountains and forests within a few hours’ drive, so I can capture many different scenes without travelling far.

× I like taking pictures of different views because I like to store a lot of different type of landscapes, beautiful land, uh, beautiful landmarks and etcetera, all in my gallery and looking back on my phone through my gallery, I like to see all those various different views that I've captured, so I like.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I like to store a lot of different types of landscapes, beautiful land, beautiful landmarks, etc., all in my gallery, and when I look back through my phone's gallery I enjoy seeing all the various views I've captured.

The phrase 'a lot of different type of landscapes' uses the singular 'type' with the quantifier 'a lot of', which is incorrect. Use the plural 'types' to match 'a lot of different'. Also remove redundant fillers and tighten punctuation. Suggestion: use plural nouns with quantifiers and simplify long sentences by using clauses like 'when I look back'.

× I prefer views in rural areas more than urban areas because in rural areas when you capture those moments just with your two eyes, what you capture is there's more to just mountains and trees, there's different type of animals and etcetera.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas because when you capture those moments with your own eyes, there is more than just mountains and trees; there are different types of animals, etc.

'Prefer ... more than' is awkward; use 'prefer X to Y'. 'Two eyes' is unnatural; use 'your own eyes'. 'There's more to just' should be 'there is more than just'. 'different type of animals' should be plural 'different types of animals' to match quantifier. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y', use 'your own eyes', and match plural forms with 'different types'.

× In urban areas you don't get those views, you get buildings and that's it.

✓ In urban areas you don't get those views; you mainly see buildings.

'That's it' is informal and vague. More precise wording 'you mainly see buildings' is better. No quantifier error here, but simplifying improves clarity and appropriateness for the register.

× I prefer views in my own country because I feel like we have the most beautiful countryside in the whole entire world.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I feel we have the most beautiful countryside in the whole world.

'The whole entire world' is redundant; use 'the whole world'. 'I feel like' can be shortened to 'I feel' for formal clarity. Suggestion: avoid redundant intensifiers.

× We have every type of animal, we have every type of beautiful landscape.

✓ We have every type of animal and every kind of beautiful landscape.

Use 'every type' and 'every kind' consistently; 'type' may be followed by plural 'types' in other contexts, but 'every type of' is acceptable. However using 'every kind of' for variety sounds more natural. Suggestion: choose consistent collocations like 'every kind of' or 'all kinds of'.

× That's almost as if it's just an art piece, a masterpiece, and we literally have everything.

✓ It is almost as if the countryside is an art piece or a masterpiece, and we literally have everything.

Original sentence is a fragmentary, conversational structure 'That's almost as if it's just an art piece' which is vague about the subject. Making the subject explicit ('the countryside') clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure. Also 'literally have everything' is hyperbolic; keep if intended, but clarify scope. Suggestion: name the subject and avoid vague pronouns to improve clarity.