Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, make the answer more natural and concise, and add one specific example. Avoid incorrect words like “wheel” and use appropriate camera terms. Keep response under five sentences and use a clear topic sentence followed by supporting detail and an example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different scenes with my phone. I often photograph animals, interesting buildings and food when I go out because I like capturing small details. For example, last weekend I took close-up shots of a street performer and some colorful market stalls to share with my friends.

Gợi ý: Use correct nouns and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons and a brief comparison with linking words. Replace incorrect words like “bills” and use vocabulary like “views” or “scenery.”

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas rather than rural ones. Urban scenery appeals to me because there is more variety — busy streets, modern architecture and diverse restaurants — whereas rural views tend to be quieter and simpler. For instance, I enjoy photographing city skylines at sunset because of the dramatic lighting and buildings.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar, be specific about what you find interesting abroad, and give a clear example. Avoid vague phrases like “wheels” and be careful with sentence structure and prepositions. Keep it concise and add linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer taking photos in other countries because different cultures offer unique scenes and architecture. For example, when I visited Vietnam and parts of Latin America, I photographed colorful street markets and colonial buildings that looked very different from those at home. This contrast makes travel photography more exciting for me.

× Of course I love taking pictures of different views with my phone.

✓ Of course, I love taking pictures of different views with my phone.

Missing comma after introductory adverb 'Of course'. This is punctuation rather than grammar category but helps clarity; keep sentence otherwise. Suggestion: insert a comma after introductory words.

× If I just see wheel of interesting animals, buildings and food, I always take pictures of them with my front camera.

✓ If I just see a wealth of interesting animals, buildings, and food, I always take pictures of them with my front camera.

The phrase 'wheel of' is incorrect; 'wealth of' or 'a lot of' fits. Also missing article 'a' before 'wealth' and commas to separate list items. Suggestion: use 'a wealth of' or 'a lot of' and add commas in lists.

× It's one of my main hobbies.

✓ It's one of my main hobbies.

Sentence is grammatically correct; subject-verb agreement is fine. No change needed.

× I like bills in both urban areas and rural areas, but if I must choose between one of them, I'll definitely take urban areas because urban areas are much more interesting than rural areas.

✓ I like both urban and rural areas, but if I must choose, I'll definitely choose urban areas because they are much more interesting than rural ones.

The word 'bills' is incorrect; likely meant 'views' or 'areas'. Repetition and awkward phrasing: 'between one of them' is incorrect—use 'if I must choose' or 'if I had to choose'. Replace 'urban areas are' with 'they are' and 'rural areas' with 'rural ones' for conciseness. Suggestion: use correct noun and more natural comparative phrasing.

× There's more people, more facilities such as restaurants, gyms and so on.

✓ There are more people and more facilities such as restaurants, gyms, and so on.

Use 'There are' with plural noun 'people' (there is/are issue—treated as quantifier/subject-verb agreement). Also add 'and' to join items and a serial comma for clarity. Suggestion: match 'there are' with plural subjects and include conjunctions in lists.

× I most definitely prefer wheels in other countries over my own country because the views from foreign countries always more interesting because they have a different culture.

✓ I most definitely prefer views in other countries to those in my own country because the views from foreign countries are always more interesting since they have different cultures.

Multiple problems: 'wheels' is incorrect word; replace with 'views'. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' (both are acceptable but 'prefer A to B' is standard). Need comparative verb 'are' in 'always more interesting'. 'They have a different culture' should be 'they have different cultures' or 'a different culture' depending; better plural. Also replace 'over my own country' with 'to those in my own country' to avoid ambiguity. Suggestion: use correct noun, correct comparative construction with 'are', and parallel pronoun 'those'.

× For example, I like to take panoramic views of cities and Latin America, Vietnam.

✓ For example, I like to take panoramic photos of cities in Latin America, such as Vietnam.

'Panoramic views of cities and Latin America, Vietnam' is unclear and structurally incorrect. Use 'panoramic photos of cities in Latin America' and give an example with 'such as Vietnam'. Also 'photos' is more natural than 'views' in this context. Suggestion: restructure to specify region then example country.