Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct article use (a/the), plurals, and word choice (perspective(s), scenery/neighborhood). Avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it lets me capture various perspectives of a place. For example, I often shoot the neighborhood at different times of day to show how light changes the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference first (urban or rural), then support with specific reasons. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas. Use correct adjectives (nostalgic), and avoid filler words (uh). Mention specific elements you like in rural areas (fields, trees, light) and how the film camera affects the photos.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I love natural scenery and simple subjects. For instance, I like photographing fields, old trees, and country roads with my film camera because the grain and muted colors create a nostalgic, cozy feel.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Provide one clear reason with a specific example, and use correct grammar (my country, temples are aesthetic). Use linking words (because, for example) and give a brief detail about the temples (architecture, colors, decorations) to enrich the response.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in my own country because it has many beautiful traditional buildings. For example, I often shoot temples with ornate roofs and colorful carvings because their architecture and details feel warm and visually interesting.

× Yes, because I like taking a pictures of different view because I can have several perspective of some something.

✓ Yes, because I like taking pictures of different views as I can have several perspectives of something.

The sentence contains article errors and number agreement: 'a pictures' should be 'pictures' (no 'a' before plural), 'different view' should be 'different views' (plural), 'several perspective' should be 'several perspectives' (plural), and 'some something' is incorrect and should be 'something'. Also replace the repeated 'because' with 'as' for smoother flow. Suggestion: remove incorrect articles and ensure nouns match singular/plural. (Grammar problem type ID: 22)

× Also I like to take a picture of neighborhood and neighbor location.

✓ Also I like to take pictures of the neighborhood and nearby locations.

The preposition and noun choices are incorrect: 'a picture of neighborhood' needs the definite article 'the neighborhood' to refer to a specific area, and 'neighbor location' is not a natural phrase; use 'nearby locations' or 'neighboring locations'. Also plural 'pictures' fits general preference. Suggestion: use appropriate articles and natural prepositional phrases. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× I like plural area because I really love to see, uh, nature and also I want to use a film camera.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I really love to see nature and I also want to use a film camera.

'I like plural area' is ungrammatical; use 'rural areas' or 'urban areas' depending on context. Quantifier/number needs correction to plural noun. Also 'to see, uh, nature' should be 'to see nature' without filler. Suggestion: replace 'plural area' with the correct plural noun and keep parallel structure. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× Film camera makes photos more nostalgical picture and it makes me cozy.

✓ Film cameras make photos look more nostalgic and they make me feel cozy.

'Nostalgical' is not a standard adjective; use 'nostalgic'. 'Makes photos more ... picture' is redundant and incorrect; use 'make photos look more nostalgic'. Subject-verb agreement also requires plural 'Film cameras make' if speaking generally. 'Make me cozy' should be 'make me feel cozy'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and appropriate verbs for sensations. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× I like taking photos of my country because I my country has many traditional buildings such as temples.

✓ I like taking photos of my country because it has many traditional buildings such as temples.

The phrase 'because I my country has' is ungrammatical; likely a duplicated subject. Replace with 'because it has' to refer to 'my country'. Suggestion: avoid repeating subjects and use pronouns to refer back correctly. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Temple makes me feel cozy and temple is aesthetic building so I like it.

✓ Temples make me feel cozy and they are aesthetically pleasing buildings, so I like them.

Singular/plural and adjective form issues: use plural 'Temples make' to match general statement, 'temple is aesthetic building' should be 'they are aesthetically pleasing buildings'. 'Aesthetic' is an adjective but 'aesthetically pleasing' is more natural here. Also pronouns must agree in number: 'them' for plural. Suggestion: ensure noun number agreement, use correct adjective/adverb forms, and match pronouns. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)