Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, because I think taking photo of the friend feels can like have a record and so like if you want to refill in the future, you can have the pictures and look at that and I think you will think about all of the memories and what happens at that moment. So I think I would yeah, I like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural areas deals more than urban areas because I think rural areas feel have many different like wonderful plans or also the fresh air. So I think it's more beautiful than urban area.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Of course, I prefer fields in my own country because I think in Hong Kong have many beautiful views and also have many, uh, traditional cultures. So I think it's special and it's different compared to other city, so I prefer it. Hong Kong feels more than other countries.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接和简洁,先用一句主题句明确回答(如“Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views.”),然后给出1-2个具体原因并用连接词衔接(because, so, for example)。注意语法和词汇的准确性(photo → photos, friend feels → fond feelings/memories),避免重复和口头语“like”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me record memories. For example, when I photograph a sunset or a cityscape, I can look back later and remember how I felt at that moment.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 先用一句清晰的偏好陈述(如“I prefer rural areas to urban ones.”),然后给出1-2个具体理由并用连接词(because, moreover)说明。注意词汇准确(plans → plants, deal more → a lot more)并避免语法错误,句子控制在五句以内。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because they have more greenery and fresher air. Moreover, the peaceful atmosphere and natural landscapes make them more beautiful and relaxing than cities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答(如“Yes, I prefer views in my own country.”),然后给出具体原因并举例说明。注意地名后面动词和冠词的使用(Hong Kong has many…),避免含糊表达和重复。可以提到具体景点或文化元素以增加细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer views in my own country because Hong Kong has many unique landscapes and traditional cultural sites. For example, I enjoy the contrast between the skyline and nearby beaches, and local festivals that make the scenery special.
× Yes, because I think taking photo of the friend feels can like have a record and so like if you want to refill in the future, you can have the pictures and look at that and I think you will think about all of the memories and what happens at that moment. So I think I would yeah, I like.
✓ Yes, because I think taking photos of friends can record feelings, and if you want to recall them in the future, you can look at the pictures and remember the memories and what happened at that time. So I would say yes, I like it.
错误类型:动词的 -ing 形式/不可数名词和复数(混合问题)。原句中“taking photo of the friend feels can like have a record” 结构混乱:‘taking photo’ 应为复数形式 ‘taking photos’,并且不需要多余的助动词 ‘can like have’。另外 ‘the friend feels’ 用法不当,应为 ‘friends’ 或 ‘feelings’ 视语义而定。‘refill’ 用法错误,应为 ‘recall’(回忆)。建议:把动作名词用复数(taking photos),把名词复数或抽象名词(friends / feelings)用正确形式,删除多余助动词,使用正确词汇(recall),并把从句顺序理清以符合英语习惯。
× I prefer rural areas deals more than urban areas because I think rural areas feel have many different like wonderful plans or also the fresh air.
✓ I prefer rural areas more than urban areas because I think rural areas have many wonderful places and fresh air.
错误类型:介词和名词选择错误。原句 ‘rural areas deals more’ 中 ‘deals’ 用法错误且不需要,正确表达为 ‘prefer A more than B’。‘wonderful plans’ 用词错误,应为 ‘wonderful places’。同时省略或多余的词如 ‘feel’ 和 ‘like’ 应删除。建议:使用固定结构 ‘prefer A more than B’,用正确名词 ‘places’ 表示地点,并去掉多余填充词以使句子清晰。
× So I think it's more beautiful than urban area.
✓ So I think it's more beautiful than urban areas.
错误类型:单复数问题。比较两类地区时,第二项应使用复数 ‘urban areas’ 而不是单数 ‘urban area’,以与前文 ‘rural areas’ 保持一致。建议:在比较集合或类别时使用复数形式。
× Of course, I prefer fields in my own country because I think in Hong Kong have many beautiful views and also have many, uh, traditional cultures.
✓ Of course, I prefer the scenery in my own country because I think Hong Kong has many beautiful views and also many traditional cultures.
错误类型:介词和句子结构错误。原句 ‘prefer fields in my own country’ 表达不自然,应改为 ‘prefer the scenery in my own country’;‘in Hong Kong have many’ 缺少主语和谓语一致,应为 ‘Hong Kong has many’。建议:使用自然搭配(scenery/views),确保句子有明确主语并做到主谓一致。
× So I think it's special and it's different compared to other city, so I prefer it. Hong Kong feels more than other countries.
✓ So I think it's special and different compared to other cities, so I prefer it. Hong Kong is more unique than other places/countries.
错误类型:定冠词/单复数与比较对象错误。原句 ‘other city’ 应为复数 ‘other cities’;‘Hong Kong feels more than other countries’ 表达不明且比较对象不当,应改为 ‘Hong Kong is more unique than other places/countries’ 或 ‘Hong Kong has more unique characteristics than other countries’。建议:比较时确保两边为可比的项(cities vs cities, countries vs countries),使用合适形容词(unique / special)并调整句子以清晰表达比较含义。