Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Correct grammar mistakes, make the answer more concise, and add a linking word to connect ideas. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy (e.g., repeating that you love and keep photos).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and unusual trees because I find nature’s colors and shapes fascinating, and I keep the best shots on my phone as memories.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and awkward phrasing, use a linking phrase to give a reason, and provide a specific detail or example to support your preference. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the scenery is more natural and peaceful. For instance, I enjoy watching open fields and colourful sunsets there, which feel more relaxing than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer structure: start with a clear topic sentence ('It depends') then explain two contrasting reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'however'). Correct grammar and remove filler words. Give one specific example of a place at home and one type of view abroad you would like to see.

Ví dụ: It depends. I like views in my own country because we have beautiful mountain lakes such as Lake X; however, I also enjoy travelling abroad to see unique urban skylines and coastal scenery that I can't find at home.

× I like to taking pictures of different views whenever I see something beautiful.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views whenever I see something beautiful.

Use of 'like' followed by a verb should be either 'like to + base verb' or 'like + verb-ing'. 'to taking' mixes infinitive marker 'to' with gerund 'taking', which is incorrect. Remove 'to' or use 'to take'. Suggestion: Use 'I like taking...' or 'I like to take...'.

× I love to capture them in my phone because I'm very addicted to nature or something unique.

✓ I love to capture them on my phone because I'm very attracted to nature and unique things.

The correct preposition for storing photos on a device is 'on' rather than 'in'. Also 'addicted to nature' is unnatural; 'attracted to' or 'fond of' fits intent. 'Or something unique' is vague and should be 'and unique things' to connect ideas properly. Suggestion: Use 'on my phone' and choose appropriate verb ('attracted to', 'fond of').

× I love to keep them in my phone as a memory.

✓ I love to keep them on my phone as a memory.

Same preposition issue: use 'on my phone'. Also 'as a memory' is acceptable but 'as memories' or 'as a reminder' may be more natural depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'on my phone' and consider plural 'memories' if keeping several photos.

× I definitely prefer views in rural areas because at that areas the scenes and views are natural.

✓ I definitely prefer views in rural areas because in those areas the scenes and views are natural.

Use 'in those areas' not 'at that areas'. 'Those' agrees in number with 'areas'. 'At' is incorrect preposition for general locations; use 'in'. Suggestion: Use 'in those areas'.

× I am very drawn to nature, that's why the sun sets and the landscape there are unusual and very interesting.

✓ I am very drawn to nature; that's why the sunsets and the landscapes there are unusual and very interesting.

Subject-verb agreement: 'sun sets' should be 'sunsets' as a noun or 'the sun' with singular verb. Original mixes clause structures. Also 'landscape... are' should be 'landscapes... are' to match plural verb, or rephrase to 'the landscape there is unusual'. Suggestion: Use consistent singular/plural forms: 'the sunsets and the landscapes there are...'.

× Sometimes I like to prefer my own country because in my country there are some places who which are so beautiful and but sometimes I would love to travel different countries to.

✓ Sometimes I prefer my own country because there are some places in my country that are so beautiful, but sometimes I would love to travel to different countries.

Multiple issues: 'like to prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer' or 'like'. 'who which' is incorrect for places; use 'that' or 'which' (or 'that are'). The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; use a single 'but'. 'travel different countries to' has wrong word order and missing preposition 'to' before 'different countries' and extra 'to' at end. Also gerund/infinitive: 'would love to travel to different countries' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' not 'like to prefer', use 'places that are', use 'but', and place 'to' before 'different countries'.