Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course taking pictures of different views can let me remember them after even after I take the trip.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I think both of them are fantastic. In urban areas you can see the modern buildings and the and the fashionable lights and views. However, in rural areas you can enjoy the natural nature like the green trees and it is quite comfortable to your eyes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I cannot compare them as all the countries have their unique sceneries.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 答案直接且能表达主要意思,但有些语病和重复("after even after")。句子较长且缺少连接词,可尝试更自然地分成两句并加入简短原因,使用更地道表达。注意发音和流畅度,避免重复词语。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love photographing different views. Photos help me preserve memories of a trip, so I often take pictures of landscapes and city scenes to remember how they looked.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答覆盖两种情况并给出对比,但存在冗余和用词不当(如"the and the","natural nature")。句子较啰嗦,需用连词加强衔接,并用更准确的词汇描述(例如 "scenery"、"soothing")。控制在最多五句内,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I enjoy both urban and rural views. Urban areas have striking modern architecture and vibrant night lights, while rural scenery offers green fields and peaceful landscapes that are soothing to the eyes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 答案简洁明了,但略显简短。可以在保留观点的同时提供一个简单的理由或例子来支持你的看法,使回答更具体。注意使用更自然的表达,例如 "unique landscapes" 或 "distinct attractions"。
Ví dụ: I can't really compare them because every country has its own unique landscapes. For example, my country has historic architecture, while other countries might offer dramatic mountains or tropical beaches.
× Yes, of course taking pictures of different views can let me remember them after even after I take the trip.
✓ Yes, of course taking pictures of different views can help me remember them even after I take the trip.
句子中使用了“can let me remember them after even after I take the trip”有重复和不自然表述。根据题意,使用“help someone do something”或“let”皆可,但“let”与“after even after”重复且语序混乱。改为“can help me remember them even after I take the trip”更自然流畅。建议:使用“help + 动词原形”表达“帮助……做某事”;避免重复词组(如“after even after”)。
× I think both of them are fantastic.
✓ I think both are fantastic.
句子中“both of them”在口语中可以接受,但在回答中更简洁自然的是“both”或“both of them”。此处并非严重错误,但可以简化为“both are fantastic”。建议:在简短回答中优先使用更简洁的结构。
× In urban areas you can see the modern buildings and the and the fashionable lights and views.
✓ In urban areas you can see modern buildings and fashionable lights and views.
原句存在重复“the and the”,以及不必要的定冠词“the modern buildings”在泛指时可省略。删除重复词并去掉多余定冠词,使句子更简洁自然。建议:泛指复数名词时通常不加定冠词(如“modern buildings”),并检查重复片段。
× However, in rural areas you can enjoy the natural nature like the green trees and it is quite comfortable to your eyes.
✓ However, in rural areas you can enjoy nature, such as green trees, which is easy on the eyes.
原句“the natural nature”重复且冗余;“comfortable to your eyes”措辞不自然,常用表达是“easy on the eyes”。改为“enjoy nature, such as green trees, which is easy on the eyes”更地道。建议:避免重复词(natural nature),用常见搭配(easy on the eyes / pleasing to the eye)替代直译表达。
× I cannot compare them as all the countries have their unique sceneries.
✓ I cannot compare them because all countries have their own unique scenery.
原句中“their unique sceneries”有两点问题:一是“scenery”通常不可数,用复数“sceneries”不自然;二是“their”可以改为“their own”或“own”更清晰。还将连词“as”改为更常用的“because”。建议:使用不可数名词“scenery”表示风景,用“own”强调归属,连词选择上“because”更常见于口语解释原因。