Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons with specific detail using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like “for my intelligence” and redundant clauses.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often post them on social media to share where I have been and to remember special events, such as parties or trips, because photos help me preserve those memories.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear position and use linking words (however, because). Provide specific comparisons and correct grammar (plural/singular, articles). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid vagueness.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views, but for different reasons. Rural areas offer peaceful greenery and streams, while cities have interesting architecture and parks where people can relax.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct place names, avoid repetition, and link sentences (for example, because, such as). Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I feel deeply connected to it. For example, the northern areas of Pakistan, such as Naran and Gilgit-Baltistan, have stunning hills and lakes that I think are unique and worth visiting.

× Yes, I like to taking pictures of different views because I posted this picture on social media for my intelligence and to show my whole of you or where I go to enjoy a party or enjoy any other function.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I post them on social media to share my experiences and show where I go to enjoy a party or another event.

The verb pattern 'like to taking' is incorrect; after 'like' use either 'to' + base verb or gerund, so use 'like taking' (Rule: verb + -ing form). Also 'posted' should be present 'post' to match habitual action; 'for my intelligence' and 'show my whole of you' are incorrect phrases and were replaced with natural expressions 'to share my experiences' and 'show where I go'. 'Any other function' corrected to 'another event' for natural phrasing.

× I prefer views in urban area as well as rural areas because in rural areas they much greenery which we can see or there is many canal or so this type of view is not really believe in urban area.

✓ I prefer views in both urban and rural areas because rural areas have much more greenery and many canals, which you do not usually see in urban areas.

Errors: 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' for parallelism; 'they much greenery' is ungrammatical — use 'have much more greenery' or 'have a lot of greenery' (quantifier use). 'There is many canal' mismatches quantifier and noun number; use 'many canals'. 'Not really believe in urban area' is incorrect wording; corrected to 'you do not usually see in urban areas.'

× So I think urban areas people go to village for these view and in urban area we go to park for.

✓ So I think people from urban areas go to villages for these views, and in urban areas we go to parks.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and missing plurals. 'Urban areas people' should be 'people from urban areas' (correct noun phrase order). 'Village' should be plural 'villages' to match 'these views'. 'In urban area we go to park for' is incomplete and ungrammatical; corrected to 'in urban areas we go to parks.'

× I prefer to view in my country because there is no country like my country.

✓ I prefer to see views in my country because there is no country like it.

'Prefer to view in my country' is awkward; 'prefer to see views in my country' is natural. Repetition 'my country' is redundant; replace second instance with pronoun 'it'. Use present simple 'is' correctly here for general preference.

× I like my country very much or I want you to visit all of northern areas of Pakistan which include Naran, Gawain, Rajasthan, Gilgit Baltistan and there are these are hilly's areas.

✓ I like my country very much, and I want you to visit the northern areas of Pakistan, which include Naran, Gawal, Rawat? Rajasthan is incorrect here; perhaps you mean 'Raja' or a specific place, and Gilgit-Baltistan; these are hilly areas.

The original mixes pronouns and has odd structure: 'or I want you to visit' should be 'and I want you to visit.' 'All of northern areas' should be 'the northern areas.' Place names contain errors: 'Gawain' likely 'Gawal' and 'Rajasthan' is a different region not in northern Pakistan; clarify place names. 'There are these are hilly's areas' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'these are hilly areas.' Also avoid using 'you' if meaning 'people' or 'visitors.'

× So I wanted to go this views.

✓ So I wanted to see these views.

'Go this views' is ungrammatical: 'go to see these views' or 'wanted to see these views.' Use 'see' with 'views' and correct demonstrative 'these' to match plural noun. Also keep tense consistent: 'wanted' is past; if speaking about desire, present 'want' may be better depending on context.