Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tuy trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng thì không nhất quán (ví dụ: 'helped' nên là 'helps'). Nội dung lặp từ (memorable và unforgettable) không cần thiết. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì hiện tại để diễn tả thói quen, thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể ngắn để minh họa. Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me broaden my horizons and preserves memorable moments. For example, when I travel, I like to photograph sunsets and mountain ranges to remember the colors and shapes. These photos also inspire me to explore new places.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời dài, lặp từ (like, the by the) và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu chủ đạo không rõ ràng và mô tả quá chung chung. Nên nói trực tiếp 'I prefer rural areas' rồi giải thích với một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: mountain scenery, quiet rivers). Sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và bỏ từ thừa để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I love natural landscapes. For instance, mountain ranges and calm rivers often create striking scenes that I find peaceful and inspiring. These quiet settings also give me better opportunities for photography.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có cấu trúc lặp và nhiều cụm từ không tự nhiên (e.g., 'mutual sense'). Lỗi ngữ pháp và thì ('helped' nên 'helps'). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: novelty, different cultures), và cho một ví dụ ngắn. Tránh tu từ thừa và sửa lỗi thì.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new and different scenery. For example, seeing coastal cliffs or foreign city skylines exposes me to different cultures and landscapes. This novelty helps me broaden my horizons and learn more about the world.

× Yes, of course, because it not only helped me to broaden my horizons, but it also allows me to capture some memorable and unforgettable landscapes and spectacles that I've been to.

✓ Yes, of course, because it not only helps me broaden my horizons, but it also allows me to capture memorable and unforgettable landscapes and sights that I have seen.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly: 'helped' is past while the rest uses present. Use present tense 'helps' to match the general statement. Replace 'spectacles' with 'sights' and 'that I've been to' with 'that I have seen' for natural English. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and prefer common collocations (broaden my horizons, sights I have seen).

× Well, I will say that is definitely the rural areas because this place contains numerous kinds of like true masterpieces which are created by the by the combination of Rocky Mountains and also tranquil rivers, which is really like impressive and attention grabbing for me.

✓ Well, I would say that I definitely prefer rural areas because this place contains many true masterpieces created by the combination of rocky mountains and tranquil rivers, which are really impressive and attention-grabbing to me.

Errors: 'that is definitely the rural areas' mixes singular 'that is' with plural 'areas' (singular/plural issue). Use 'I definitely prefer rural areas.' 'Numerous kinds of like' is wordy and incorrect; use 'many.' 'which are created' matches plural 'masterpieces' (subject-verb agreement). 'rocky' should be lowercase. 'attention grabbing' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective. Suggestion: simplify phrases, match singular/plural, and use correct compound adjective hyphenation.

× Well, I would say that it definitely the views of other countries because the view in my neighborhood is quite, you know, accustomed for me.

✓ Well, I would say that I definitely prefer the views of other countries because the view in my neighborhood is quite familiar to me.

'It definitely the views' is missing a verb and uses 'it' incorrectly; also 'accustomed for me' is wrong. Use present tense 'I definitely prefer' and 'familiar to me' to express being used to something. Suggestion: include the verb 'prefer' and use the correct adjective 'familiar' with preposition 'to.'

× So I, I have a bit kind of like mutual sense whenever I see it.

✓ So I have a kind of mixed feeling whenever I see it.

The original is disfluent and contains redundant fillers ('a bit kind of like') and an unclear phrase 'mutual sense.' Simplify to 'a kind of mixed feeling' to convey ambivalence. Suggestion: remove filler words and choose a clear noun phrase to express the feeling.

× So exploring other view in other countries would be better for me because it helped me broaden my horizon.

✓ So exploring views in other countries would be better for me because it helps me broaden my horizons.

Tense inconsistency: 'would be' (conditional) can remain, but 'helped' is past and should be present 'helps' to match general benefit. Also 'view' should be plural 'views' and 'horizon' plural 'horizons' is the common collocation. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and use correct plural forms and collocations.