Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid fillers (umm, uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention a brief reason or example to make it more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes — I love taking pictures, especially of natural scenery. For example, I often photograph the field in front of my house because the morning light makes the sky, sun and trees look very dramatic and colorful.

Gợi ý: The answer is contradictory and unclear (saying you prefer urban areas but describing rural greenery). Make your preference clear in the topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, using linking words. Remove repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I enjoy natural landscapes. For instance, the green fields in front of my house are very eye-catching and refreshing, especially in the morning when the light is soft and dewy.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and vague phrases (e.g., "so pretty", "more prettier"). Give one clear reason and a specific example, and use linking words to contrast other countries briefly. Keep it within a few concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes, such as the mountains and valleys in northern Pakistan. Although some other countries have impressive scenery too, I find the familiar combination of fields and peaks at home more appealing.

× I love taking pictures of different sceneries, especially when I visit, umm, green places like uh, the field in front of my house.

✓ I love taking pictures of different scenery, especially when I visit green places like the field in front of my house.

Use 'scenery' (uncountable) instead of plural 'sceneries'. Also remove filler words and unnecessary articles: 'the field in front of my house' is correct. This improves noun form and natural expression. Suggestion: Use 'scenery' for general views and avoid filler words.

× I often go there and take pictures of uh, sky and sun and trees and everything that.

✓ I often go there and take pictures of the sky, the sun, the trees, and everything like that.

The sentence lacked articles before countable nouns and ended with an incomplete phrase 'everything that'. Add definite articles 'the' for specific things and correct the phrase to 'everything like that' for completeness. Suggestion: Include appropriate articles and finish idiomatic expressions.

× Of course, I will always, uh, prefer urban areas over rural areas because the greenery and the beauty there is so insane.

✓ Of course, I will always prefer urban areas over rural areas because the greenery and the beauty there are so impressive.

'Prefer' can be used without 'will' for habitual preference, but 'will' is acceptable for emphasis. The noun phrase 'the greenery and the beauty' is plural and requires plural verb 'are', not 'is'. Also 'insane' is informal and odd here; 'impressive' or 'striking' is more appropriate. Suggestion: Match verb number to the compound subject and use suitable adjectives.

× As I'm from a village, uh, for example, uh, in front of my house there is, there are this waste fields.

✓ As I'm from a village, for example, in front of my house there are these waste fields.

Use 'there are' for plural 'fields' rather than 'there is'. Also correct 'this' to 'these' to match plural. Remove fillers and redundant commas. Suggestion: Use 'there are' + plural noun and 'these' for plural demonstratives.

× They're so green, they're so eye-catching, refreshing and I love to go there, uh, especially in the morning.

✓ They're very green and eye-catching, refreshing, and I love to go there, especially in the morning.

Use 'very' instead of repeated 'so' to avoid repetition; add conjunctions and commas for clarity. Parallel structure improves readability. Suggestion: Vary intensifiers and maintain parallel adjective structure.

× Well, I will prefer my country because it has so many beautiful landscapes, fields, mountains.

✓ Well, I prefer my country because it has so many beautiful landscapes, fields, and mountains.

For preferences in general, use simple present 'prefer' rather than 'will prefer'. Also add 'and' before the final item in a list for correct coordination. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual or general preferences and include the Oxford comma or 'and' before the last item.

× Especially the northern areas of Pakistan are so pretty.

✓ The northern areas of Pakistan are especially pretty.

Move 'especially' to modify the noun phrase naturally and avoid redundant 'are so pretty'; 'especially pretty' is more concise. Suggestion: Place adverbs near the words they modify and keep concise adjectives.

× It's so attractive and beautiful sights to watch.

✓ They are attractive and beautiful sights to see.

Subject-verb agreement: 'sights' is plural so use 'they are' or rephrase. Also use 'to see' instead of 'to watch' for sights; 'attractive and beautiful' is redundant—one adjective may suffice. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and choose appropriate verbs for perception.

× But of course there are other countries as well which are more prettier.

✓ But of course there are other countries as well which are prettier.

'More prettier' is a double comparative; use either 'prettier' or 'more beautiful', not both. Remove 'more' before the comparative form. Suggestion: Use correct comparative forms: 'prettier' or 'more beautiful'.

× But I would prefer my country of course.

✓ But I would prefer my country, of course.

Add a comma before 'of course' for natural punctuation. 'Would prefer' is acceptable in a polite or hypothetical context; no tense change needed. Ensure punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Use commas to set off discourse markers like 'of course'.