Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and precise: correct grammar (plural forms and articles), avoid vague phrases, and add a clear linking word when giving an example. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use specific descriptive vocabulary (e.g., ‘scenery’, ‘composition’, ‘lighting’).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing the scenery and light. For example, when I travelled to Abuja, I photographed a panoramic view of the tallest tower, focusing on the building’s reflection at sunset. It was a great way to practice composition and mood.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (start with a topic sentence) and correct grammar (singular/plural, articles). Use linking words (because, whereas) and give specific examples of what you like in urban scenes (skyline, bridges, street life). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like ‘sky creep’.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy skylines and modern architecture. For instance, cityscapes with glass skyscrapers, riverside promenades and busy bridges offer interesting contrasts and reflections. Whereas rural views tend to be quieter and more uniform, which I appreciate less for photography.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast (however, although). Improve grammar (use ‘other countries’ and correct tense/forms) and give a specific comparison or a brief reason why foreign architecture appeals to you. Keep to 2–4 sentences and include vivid vocabulary (e.g., ‘landmarks’, ‘illuminated skyline’).

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I love seeing diverse architecture and famous landmarks. For example, foreign illuminated skylines and historic façades offer striking shapes and colours at night. Although I appreciate my countryside’s fields and natural charm, I find international cityscapes more inspiring for photography.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different view because it is very exciting to watch the aesthetics of this world.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it is very exciting to observe the aesthetics of this world.

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' to match 'different'. Also 'watch' is less appropriate with 'aesthetics'; use 'observe'. Suggestion: use plural forms when referring to multiple items and choose verbs collocated with the noun (observe/see rather than watch).

× For example, when I was travelling to Abuja, I took a panoramic view of the largest tower in the state.

✓ For example, when I was traveling to Abuja, I took a panoramic photo of the largest tower in the state.

'Took a panoramic view' is incorrect: you take a photo or capture a panoramic view. Also 'travelling' (British) is fine but keep consistent spelling; changed to 'traveling' (American). Suggestion: use 'take a photo' or 'capture a panoramic view' for photography contexts and ensure verb collocations are correct.

× I prefer views in urban area because you see more modern facilities like the the river, the lakes or even the sky creep skyscrapers and large buildings.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because you see more modern facilities like the river, lakes, or even sky‑scraping skyscrapers and large buildings.

Use plural 'areas' to match 'urban' in a general sense. Also remove duplicate 'the the' and use plural 'lakes' without 'the' when listing generally. 'Sky creep skyscrapers' is incorrect; use 'sky‑scraping' or 'skyscrapers'. Suggestion: use plural forms and correct adjectives, and proofread for duplicated words.

× However in the rural areas all you can see is the bushes around or if there's any other thing.

✓ However, in rural areas all you can see are bushes, unless there is something else.

Subject-verb agreement: 'all you can see is the bushes' should use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural 'bushes'. 'If there's any other thing' is awkward; use 'unless there is something else'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use natural connectors for alternatives.

× I prefer the views of the outside country because of the beautiful architecture and the city landmarks such as the skyscrapers that lit up the night.

✓ I prefer the views of foreign countries because of their beautiful architecture and city landmarks, such as skyscrapers that light up the night.

'Outside country' is not natural; use 'foreign countries'. Use plural possessive 'their' to agree with plural 'countries'. 'That lit up the night' is past tense; use present 'light up' for general truth. Also drop the definite article before 'skyscrapers' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('foreign countries'), match pronouns to their antecedents, and keep tense consistent for habitual facts.

× However, in my countryside, the views are filled with fields and bushes, which I really appreciate.

✓ However, in my countryside, the views are filled with fields and bushes, which I really appreciate.

'My countryside' is acceptable in some varieties but often 'the countryside' or 'my country' is better. No grammatical correction required under the provided list, so sentence left unchanged. Suggestion: for clearer English, consider 'in my country' or 'in the countryside' depending on intended meaning.